A bit off an odd read, but still, rather nice and sweet in its own way.

awww

That, my friend, was beautiful. I've only written once for the Spyro fandom and that was for the Original series, but this here is an example to live by. I loved your imagery; the entire story was very sweet. Excellent work!

i like this better than the original story line, but, sparx? welcoming cynder to the family! C'MON! AS IF!

HOW cuuTE! :D I WAS SMILING THE WHOLE STORY! bravo! awesome story even the last part was kool! :)

Sweet oneshot man, glad to see that you are back! Even if it is tenatively. I felt as though you took on all sides of their story, which was really cool. The incorporation of Cynder's old attitude, the teenage hormnoes, and the innocent playing scene, all captured a sense of what could have happenned in the game. That to me is important(get ready for rambling), as I can not tell you the amount of fanfics that have been written on material that is not borrowed or implied from any of the Spyro games. Your commitment to sticking with the story definitely needs some praise and I whole-heartedly applauad you.

I like it, and you did seem to keep everyone in character so good job. But really, I don't think that Cynder's personality was off in DotD. I mean, from the two scenes we saw her in in TEN, she went from borderline emo to her feistier self that we saw more of in Dawn. But that's just a difference of opinion, and it doesn't take away from the fic at all. Great job!

AW!

Great little one-shot. I love the ending of it though.

Wow, alot of people thought you were dead or something... its funny but a bit strange, you've just been busy for a long time so it couldnt be helped, an interesting chapter.

i'll check out on cynders past personality one day and maybe i can get the differences.

hope to read more of your work soon!_

The Fanfictionlover

Well written scene :) Yeah, I found it odd that in Dawn of the Dragon, they seemed to get along perfectly, but in the last game not so much...

YAY YOU'RE NOT DEAD! glad to have you back Dream! great story, like I expected anything else! anyways I totally understand the 12 hours of school per day thing, that can really take up some time, and I don't know if you're in college but if so thats A LOT of homework so take all the time you need, I'm just glad to see you back!1one! (idk just felt like doing that) anyways I'm writing a Kingdom Hearts Truth or dare fic and I was wondering If Mistress could be my co-co-host for one chap or 2? anyways, please respond,

your loyal long time fan,

-Spyrofan1(A.K.A. (remember this?) Dreamnorns#1fan)

i love you

aw, that was so sweet! 12 hours of school eh? I know how you feel.

O MY GOD YOU AREN'T DEAD!

I can't wait for Spyro Survivor, and this was awesome! You totally gave Cynder her personality back!

Looking forward to more from you again,

thadudeman