This is really, really nice. The allusion works very well, and the shifting of his universe with Sango's arrival nicely dovetails the geographic perspective.

One editorial note: you used "factionally" when I think you meant "fractionally".

Nice. Me like ^_^

ver cute! love sango/miroku fluff! also very true! miroku was meant to be a wanderer cause of his curse then kagome draws him into thier group and sango as well, before they realized what was happening they were their own little pack.