First of all I'm terribly sorry for not adding this story sooner; I can't believe what kind of an incompetent HA! fan reader I am.

For long time I have not read anything as romantic and intense as this chapter.

DISREGARD WHAT I SAID BEFORE. THIS. OH GOD. Is the best chapter ever! I love how smooth it read (yay English majors!) and I couldn't stop gaping and giggling at her kissing Arnold again and again...I totally see her doing that!

And Arnold just going with the flow...even doubting himself... he was so real. The opening and introduction of her side that goes off on poetic tangents (glad he noticed!) was brilliant. Everything you write is brilliant. I'm gonna go cool my head now. This chapter was HOT. New beginnings ahoy!

Great Chapter

The Shoop Shoop Song! Great choice. :D Haha.

Anyway, I absolutely love this. Everything is just so well-written and you make it easy to relate to what each of the characters are feeling. Just...ah. I LOVE this. :)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

-Kristie.

I fricken cried during this story.

Helga is so wonderfully psychotic and sincere. She reminds me of myself, at times. I think that's why I like her so much as a character.

I kinda want to sing you praises, like Helga does to Arnold, but poetry's not my thing - so I'll just say I enjoyed this story immensely. Thank you for writing this and posting it for everyone to read.

Bye. :)

I love this! Again, your awesome creative mind es,as always, AWESOME!!

That was possibly the BEST Helga confession scene I have EVER read, EVER. Wow. That's just great. And so totally Helga! *sigh* The wonderfulness of this story blows my mind. Seriously, this is amazing. Love, love, love, LOVE it!! :D

And once again I am amazed at how well you capture everyone's personality! And you used the phrase, "(Blank) as all get out," which is just cool, lol. ;)

Simply great!!

My favorite chapter. The tears were coming when she started whispering "you are my sunshine." And she resigned to keep him away.

But Arnold...and his last words about being an optimist...that gives me hope! Oh please tell me there's more coming soon! You continue to be a fantastic writer!!

o*3*o omg this is wonderful! <3
what came to mind was "those two are so sappy, like trees!" 3> so whatever XP

so god! i got shivers C:

is it going to be continued?

~silverwizardmon

Holy shit! That was one hell of a chapter. (Forgive my cursing, please.) I absolutely love Helga's dialog peppered with kisses, dramatic poetic verse, unchecked temper and--it's just totally Helga. You did a wonderful job of capturing Helga's personality and thoughts with that bit of passage. And I don't think I can write any constructive comments right now--I'm just too blown away by Helga's words. So, keep on writing!

I loved it! That was an amazing job you did. =D

omigoshomigosh! <3 this is so good! what happens next?!?!?! @_@

Omg Great chapter :D

I must say, I have fallen so much in love with this story, it's not even funny. I cannot wait to find out what happens next! Arnold's going to have to fight for Helga's love! xD In all honesty, I'll always believed that while Helga was the one in the relationship on the outside who put up such a tough exterior, on the inside, Arnold holds the aggressive edge. He's shown a few times in a couple of episodes, that he has a wild rebellious streak...I think that he'd surely dominate her. :)

I love this story so much! <3 Please update again soon