 dracula-key 2009-11-21 . chapter 8this is geting good. good thing james used his shield to get that bag, becuase it would ironic if a spider bit him and it was a black widow. I liked the Ray/James moment in this chapter. can't wait to read more |
 Crabbymatt 2009-11-15 . chapter 7 Cyclops and Jean's son...and he's carrying Gambit's staff. One of the Morloks is X-23. And now Storm's son is among them. |
 dracula-key 2009-11-07 . chapter 5nice work, I so did not see the x-men's kids coming into this. |
 ray 2009-11-04 . chapter 1 Wow,great with the plot and grammer. Keep going it's so worth reading, I have always wanted to know what happened afterword! |
 00909 2009-11-03 . chapter 4 i like it. up-date? |
 Crabbymatt 2009-10-28 . chapter 3 Nate? Ray? Oh, my God. X-Man and Phoenix. These are Scott and Jean's kids! That means...these tunnels ARE the secret base of the X-Men! |
 00909 2009-10-28 . chapter 3 hm... interesting turn of events. Up-date please |
 dracula-key 2009-10-27 . chapter 3that is a good chapter. I'm guessing there is going to be some james/ray moments in the future. keep up the good work |
 dracula-key 2009-10-24 . chapter 2nice work, this story is turning out preaty good |
 00909 2009-10-23 . chapter 1 update please. :] |
 OceanProductions61 2009-10-22 . chapter 1Cool, a Next avenger fanfic
I like it. Keep uploading |