Good start.

O_O ...
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NO!
you can't end it there where is the romance!

Wow, I had not even realized the story was over until the author's note. I hope you decide to write some sort of sequel. It seemed like things were kinda left unfinished. Either way though, really good chapter and a great story.

Your work is amazing as always. I'm reviewing from a friend's account but most of your stories are listed on my favourites. I'm an avid follower of your work, you never seem to disappoint.

AH! How can that be the end!? x-(
before i realized this was complete i was just going to say Woah Intense chapter but cmon i feel like there are too many loose ends for this to be complete *pouts*

This was a very good and somewhat different story, I'm glad I stumbled across it. Though it's only five chapters long, it's very good and has a sense of completion to it.

I think I enjoyed the fact that you managed to keep Kagome and Sesshoumaru as in-character as possible given the time and situation the most. Not to mention the emotion put into each chapter -- especially in the fourth where they were almost discovered, you had me truly worried.

It was truly a treat reading this.

Another wonderful chapter! I really wish there was more, though. Oh, well. I did enjoy this fic very much and I will always look forward to your next one. ^-^

aww, it's OVER?!?! nu T.T there is so much that could be left to be written... *sigh* but i guess we can't always get what we want. It was amazing while it lated, excellent job :3 this story caught my attention as soon as i read the first few lines. Great job, and i can't wait to read more of your work!! Till next time, later

It was heartbreaking that he cared enough to try and protect her but in the end all she was left with was death and the dying.

Kinda reminds me that Ghibli movie "Grave of the Fireflies" - sometimes good intentions don't lead you to the best results. At least she is still alive for now.

awhh
will there be a sequel?

Oh wow, they were almost found out O.O my heart was racing!! it seems that your stories have that kind of effect on me ^_^' excellent job on this chapter, i love it :D especially that last sentence, really left us hanging hahahaha anyways, please update as soon as u get the chance!! till next time, laters!

wonderful chapter! ^-^

fed my pervy

awhh poor kags ;o
can't wait for more!

could some one come and try robbing kagome's house and them hide where no one can find them