Very entertaining. I enjoyed the prank battle. Very good readable format also. Keep up the good work.

omg please say u r continuing this awesome story!

so freaking good! i loved this story too much for words! the phone sex...so good! the pranking...so funny and cute and it really helped build up their relationship! perfect story! i wish you would write more chapters to it! PLEASE! i'd be the happiest person ever! think about it!!

...HOTT!...(fanning my self)

Do you know how hard it is to read on a blackberry? Very. I didn't have internet connection for a week and I kept getting all these story alerts and it was like you were secretly taunting me so now I'm all belated but it's actually okay because I can actually SEE the words I'm reading now and give a proper review. Also, I like college fic - so yeses all around already.

I so badly wanted to read fic about Miss Higglebottom and her English accent! I swear it's like you read my Jalex mind! OMG BREAD/DOLLY PARTON! Alex is so annoying yet somehow everyone loves her. This is hilarious (I've commenting as reading btw) ah the classy Showgirls. "And he said about role-playing" oh, lol forever. And of course he's a psych major! ack.

"This is just what we do." "And ‘here’ is beginning to get a little uncomfortable." “It bothers me, alright?” “It seems to almost work for us,” Entering what are you wearing? territory. (how it's all in the subconcious) I mean I could go on listing my favorite things because I'm noticing how bad I am at giving proper reviews, but ugh whatever. I wanna be like Dean's sidekick Joey and back-pat you and say "You got this Dean!" because you SO do. You get the comic, the emotion, the everything amd how! The fairly tame phone sex, considering the incestual-ness of it all was great. Oh man, I wish this show were on HBO or something. And you writing for them, of course.

So I'm going to comment on her and on LJ, because this.. was HOT. I loved it. XD

GAH
Thats my favorite expression when something is simply amazing by the way. Like this story is. I can so see all the blushes and eye rolls and hear their tones when they're talking. And just the innuendo of what was happening, without explicitly saying it, made it so much hotter. The moans and groans and 'Yeah's of it was simply amazing.
If you decide to write future chapters, I HIGHLY SUGGEST IT.
This was great.

ah! my friend told me to read this & im so glad that i did! it was beyond hot! not gonna lie, if you make this into a full story it could possibly one of my favorite M rated ones. i love this! please please please update! we all need to know what happens next :)

ahh omg that was so hot! i can't wait until the next chapter!! update asap!!

Wow, that was so...I don´t have word to describe it.
I loved it. Please make another chapter I really want to know what happens.
Please!
I hope you update.
Bye

you seriously write the best justin/alex stories!! its crazy! i love it, please write more!

:)

Incredible as usual!

HA! When I saw "M for innuendo and slight inappropriateness," I thought, "eh, it's probably going to be like most of her other Jalex's: unbelievably well written, but very subtle Jalex themes. Nothing is actually going to happen between them." But god damn, woman. You really, pleasantly, surprised me with this one haha.

At first, even though you said she was bugging Justin because unwelcomed attention is still attention, I thought Alex was just being a bit too mean. Then the prank wars started, and things were getting out of hand. I know their pranks are what make them uniquely THEM, but I was starting to just feel bad for Justin. Because face it. No matter how hard Justin tries, Alex will always be better than him at pranks. But then there was the glimmer of hope with Alex's hint of jealousy when she met phone girl. And that's when my ears perked up and my tail started wagging.

I love when Alex is in denial. [I feel like she would try to convince herself out of anything that isn't the status quo for her (even non-relationship things)]. The phone thing was definitely a GREAT device for both of them, since the topics they discussed were very...touchy. And since both of them were probably in denial for the longest time (not to mention naturally defensive during serious situations), confronting each other face to face would have come with too many inhibitions. We wouldn't have gotten the wonderful results that actually happened. I don't think my reading speed has ever slowed down to a snail's pace so quickly after blazing through the beginning (it's 5am on a weekday night and I have to get up in a few hours. Cut a guy some slack haha). When the Christmas part rolled around...well I don't think I have to say more since you I can tell you that you got the effect you were going after.

One last thing before I get out of your hair (could I use any more idioms/cliches?). Justin's constant need to keep bringing up walking in on Alex was really telling. Even though he really ISN'T the one who pushes the Jalex boundary, I'm glad he put in some effort. Or at least it seemed like some effort to me by bringing up the topic so many times. And this is a Quote For Truth:

"If she leaves it up to him they’re never going to get any further and this will just be one twisted memory that they’ll bury and try to ignore whenever they’re together.

Not happening."

Thank god there's Alex haha. This needs to be put in every Jalex story ever created because it's so true. Which also means they've gotta STOP backing down when things are heating up.

I hope you continue in this direction of Jalex. Your other stuff is amazing, but I KNOW you know that you're teasing us most of the time. 95% of us don't ship Jalex JUST for well written, subtle inferences of Jalex. It sure is appreciated, but it kills us (or at least me) a little inside not knowing what happens next. I know it's a crude analogy, and I apologize if it's out of line, but it's kind of like soft core porn. It looks freakin amazing, but really just has you begging, PLEADING for more. Haha. I hope that made sense. I didn't mean to offend or belittle your works to the likes of porn. But that's the best I can come up with right now. Once again, great piece. I can't wait to read more of your stuff. Your name is almost synonymous with great writing.

*shakes head* I love how you get these two- their characters and how these amazing... slightly inappropriate... stories are great to read. and I loved the (tame) phone sex. It was very Alex prompting Justin along, and him surprising her. great writing.

Your fics are always so amazing. I loved the pranks in this one, and the tension you could cut through with a knife. Yum.