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Reviews for: Forever Falling: Ami and Zoicite
DavisJes 1/8/09 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Is this a one shot?
asga 12/23/05 . chapter 1
oh no so sad i am crying when i read this but awesome story
Hana1 8/19/04 . chapter 1
Lovely, lovely story!
neoqueen 11/20/02 . chapter 1
so sad...

its pretty good
AmethystSerenity 3/20/02 . chapter 1
It brought tears to my eyes. So sweet and so sad.
Ankle 1/19/02 . chapter 1
i like... you should expand on it
Story Oracle 1/18/02 . chapter 1
I love your story! Write more!
Fae 1/14/02 . chapter 1
Hey Joyce, it's Robin. I didn't know you wrote "romance". This is sorta romancyish... I think it was kinda funny, but it was probably supposed to be serious, only, I've no idea who Ami and Zoi-thing are. I like the ending tho, the last two paras, they were really good. (don't you love my vivid use of adjectives? anyway...i like the falling in love and falling tear drop thingy associated [oops, wrong word, oh well]...yes...right!) Oh and what does "transcend" mean? You used it like a million times, and I figured out the contest, but tell me is denotation. :) (Like in PE, when there's nothing else to do...)

Blah, blah, well, I can't think of anything else to write, so visit MY thingy and review my stuff, since at least you KNOW who the HP characters are. (And most of my stuff is short, so it shouldn't take long.) Oh, and look at "At First Glance" and tell me what you think of Lily, I need help on it, MAJORLY, and there's no plot, etc. etc. But read the other stuff to two too. Like the Agasian Cat story, it's cool. And "The Ivory Path" is the one I submitted to Lit Mag. Bye, tootles, happy writing, happy making-fun-of-my-writing, and, um, bonne chance, je m'en fou, etc. etc. etc. (okay, it's like 11pm on monday jan. 14 and I'm TIRED-HYPER and everyone knows how that feels, so bye!)
Neo Princess Mercury 1/14/02 . chapter 1
Wow! that was soooo sweet.I'm not a Ami/Zoicite fan, but i definately thought this was the sweetest thing i've read in a while. Ami is my favorite character, and it's hard to find stories about her. thank you and keep writing!
wyannick54 1/13/02 . chapter 1
Oh, How wonderful that was. Sweet and sad at the same time. Thank-you for writing about my favorite couple in SM.
blue eyes 1/13/02 . chapter 1
yeah...it's a romance finally that is not so sugary and sweet and light good on ya keep up the great work ur doin ok
Kaze 1/13/02 . chapter 1
very very sweet. absolutely beautiful.
The 80lb Carrot 1/13/02 . chapter 1
sequel? please? i'm not really much of a sailor moon fan but ami is my favorite character and you dont see much of her. this is really well written and i really want to see where else you take this. maybe have her meet up with zoicite sometime in the present?
Alyson Grant 1/13/02 . chapter 1
That was so good! Alyson Grant )-
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