 Fae 1/14/02 . chapter 1Hey Joyce, it's Robin. I didn't know you wrote "romance". This is sorta romancyish... I think it was kinda funny, but it was probably supposed to be serious, only, I've no idea who Ami and Zoi-thing are. I like the ending tho, the last two paras, they were really good. (don't you love my vivid use of adjectives? anyway...i like the falling in love and falling tear drop thingy associated [oops, wrong word, oh well]...yes...right!) Oh and what does "transcend" mean? You used it like a million times, and I figured out the contest, but tell me is denotation. :) (Like in PE, when there's nothing else to do...)
Blah, blah, well, I can't think of anything else to write, so visit MY thingy and review my stuff, since at least you KNOW who the HP characters are. (And most of my stuff is short, so it shouldn't take long.) Oh, and look at "At First Glance" and tell me what you think of Lily, I need help on it, MAJORLY, and there's no plot, etc. etc. But read the other stuff to two too. Like the Agasian Cat story, it's cool. And "The Ivory Path" is the one I submitted to Lit Mag. Bye, tootles, happy writing, happy making-fun-of-my-writing, and, um, bonne chance, je m'en fou, etc. etc. etc. (okay, it's like 11pm on monday jan. 14 and I'm TIRED-HYPER and everyone knows how that feels, so bye!) |