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Laurenmlbc
2009-12-16 . chapter 12
:( I was really sad when he died too I liked how you wrapped this into the what not to do in a horror movie haha, it's so true! Great chapter!
Laurenmlbc
2009-12-16 . chapter 11
I like that quote, very true. It's pretty crazy to think that...breaking up with someone or breaking their heart can make them insane. I mean, he probably had some notions to begin with, most serial killers do lol...but it makes you wonder. Great job with this!
Laurenmlbc
2009-12-16 . chapter 10
Yeah, he really can. He did redeem himself though, which I was glad about. Great chapter!
Laurenmlbc
2009-12-16 . chapter 9
That girl...just really creeped me out lol. Throughout the whole show, just creepy. But she held the key to all of their ...getting away, probably should have paid more attention to her. Great job!
Laurenmlbc
2009-12-16 . chapter 8
That was the worse scene. It was the only death that made me cry. Yet, I loved it...like I loved the way they did it, it was perfect for them. Great chapter!
Laurenmlbc
2009-12-16 . chapter 7
I always think about that when I say goodbye to people...like what if these were my last words...so I try to make them good. Great job!
Laurenmlbc
2009-12-16 . chapter 6
That was so sad! Even though he was insanely crazy...and a tad incesty (that's not a word but it'll work here ha) lol...I STILL felt bad for him at the end. Probably because the entire show I loved him, I loved Trish and him together, I just loved him. ..and then he had to be the killer haha. It was still cool though, great job with this! That had to be shocking, that's for sure.
Laurenmlbc
2009-12-16 . chapter 5
I can't imagine how traumatizing or how hard that would have been to go through. Especially since her dad sent her away. I wonder how things would have been different had he not sent her away. Great chapter!
Laurenmlbc
2009-12-16 . chapter 4
:( That made me sad too...poor JD...I knew he wasn't the killer, it was just too easy for them to think that. That had to suck hugely though, being killed by your own brother. That's pretty low. Great job!
Laurenmlbc
2009-12-16 . chapter 3
Oh, that's great! I love them, I'm glad he didn't kill Jimmy. Was kinda surprised the show let them get away hah, but it was good. Great chapter!
Laurenmlbc
2009-12-16 . chapter 2
Very good choice of characters and the word Blind...poor Shea, what a sucky thing to happen , especially at that time. He sure died in a horrible fashion though..Richard. That was one of the coolest deaths by far...that sounds kinda morbid but still. Great chapter, I like the quotes you use at the beginning too!
Laurenmlbc
2009-12-16 . chapter 1
I didn't like Sully much throughout the show till the last couple of episodes, but this scene was so sad to me...cause that was his best friend. And he had NO clue..that would just suck, you did a great job writing his thought! And wrapping it into your title, looks like a cool series, definitely well keep reading!
Story-Teller-Fairy
2009-12-11 . chapter 12
These are FREAKIN AWESOME!

I love them!
imhappyboy
2009-12-08 . chapter 12
Yesh, new drabble! :'D Danny was awesome character and it was kinda sad when he died. Not my favorite character but still. I liked this one and the title was perfect for him.
Kuro Yuki Valkyrie
2009-12-02 . chapter 11
last two chapters were really good. didn't know that Shane felt that way.
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