this is quite a good fic.

That was really sweet! I'm so glad you shared this with us :)
Project314 recommended this to me and even though I havent seen Jungle Fury, from what I've read about it on various messageboards and a little Googling, you've made me feel empathetic towards some scary-looking villains. ;)

That was so sweet! And so realistic! I can just feel the peace and tramquility surrounding them! Awesome job with a great pairing!

Very nice, and a very sweet exploration of the two most interesting characters in Jungle Fury. I particularly liked the line; "It is warm, alien to her cold blood, but it is also inviting. Like sun on her scales". Really loved this, both as an image and a sense of their relationship as a whole.

Aren't I glad I checked out the PR page today. To be honest, I didn't even notice the story description or the title at first. My eyes were just drawn to three words, 'Funky in Fishnet', and that triggered a gasp as three other words flashed in my mind, 'But a Child'.

I can't really recall the last time I took my time to read a story, to try and make it last as long as possible. I just savored every word, every little image in there, hoping it wouldn't end.

All that to say, it was a really great piece. The focus on Camille and, to a lesser extent, on Jarrod made for a very special story. From the opening visual where Jarrod's sleeping, head on her lap, holding her hand, to the final moment, when they're walking hand in hand, just wow. And I loved the insight into her feelings.

That was awesome, I loved it. Thank you so much!

David =D

I really love this. I think Jarrod and Camille are quite interesting, very good together, just right. You really captured that in this. You show them so well, and why it is that they are together.

I like Camille's thoughts and how she views things, the differences between Jarrod and Dai Shi. I also thought it was really cool how you brought in the others' even if it was just small.