Love the straw thing. I may or may not have done that a couple hundred times. :)
Great conversation. Booth definitely knows when to not argue with Brennan, and I'm glad he's...accepting.
Dana

Wow, heavy topic with the living will, but I can totally see Brennan thinking about that. Nice work with her processing who she should get to be the witness.
Wow, I adore the scene between Brennan and Cam. I was utterly surprised--in a good way--that she chose Cam, but it was definitely the right decision.
Cam's advice was excellent; Brennan does need to give Booth a warning. And Cam's last line, simple, yet complex, and it says so much.
Great job. Off to read the next chapter!
Dana

very interesting topic for a story.
very in character for bren and i love the line about her not caring what rebecca thinks cos she'll be dead!
nice work, very well written!

This is a very interesting story. Though people don't want to talk or think about death, they really do have to do just that.

This is very good =]

I really like this story and hope that you'll continue. :-)

lol, "not my problem, I'll be dead." I laughed so hard at that line. I can just imagine Brennan face as she says it. Great job

LOVE IT.
Whoever wants to disagree with me, nitpick at me. AHAHA. Anywayy... I love the pie line. "Of course I am. Apple."
LOL. Apple pie is amazing, though I don't like pie. Confusing, huh?
Love you mom! I can't wait until you update!

Just finished Chapter 1 (am about to embark upon Chap 2). Excellent job. I think you did better with characterization here than you did in the initial story (though that was good too, I definitely reviewed and said that, but you are clearly improving with each iteration!). Good premise. Can't wait to read more!

Okay in case you were unaware, I love this a lot.
Seriously, do not doubt yourself when it comes to Bones.
You're one of the (if not THE) best writers I know.
I love you!
-me

is Bones sick? can't wait to see where this fic ends up.

Have I mentioned how epic you are in the last 20 minutes? Cause seriously? EP-IC
I love this. You nailed Brennan and Cam to a t.
You win at life.
:)
-me

I only have one thing to say to you.

MORE, darn it, MORE Bones stories!

You really have them spot-on. I can hear the actors' voices saying the lines and visualize their movements/locations without a problem. Reading this was like watching one of non-case moments of the show. You're particularly good with Bones' voice, her manner of speaking and the words she uses.

Bravo!