 Moon-prince23 2010-01-02 . chapter 13Please continue with this story |
 Aria DeLoncray 2009-11-21 . chapter 13Ah! No! Couldn't you do the meet the family part and then go on hiatus? I understand though, about there not being enough about the characters on the real show. I stopped watching awhile ago. That's why I turned to fanfiction. |
 babygurl1944 2009-11-20 . chapter 12Can't wait to see how Derek's family reacts to her. Can't wait to read the next chapter. |
 kyw0202 2009-11-18 . chapter 11very good chapters!! |
 babygurl1944 2009-11-15 . chapter 9Just found the story and love it. Can't wait to read the next chapter. |
 Itsa Riddle 2009-11-11 . chapter 8This fic is absolutely adorable. There should be more DerekOC fics out there and this one awesome! I hope you update soon because I'm dieing to know what happens next.
Love it!
Itsa Riddle |
 ChristinaMorgan101 2009-11-07 . chapter 1This story is very well written & and just overall a great story! I can't wait until the next chapter and I'm always checking to see if it's updated! Please update soon :) |
 kyw0202 2009-11-06 . chapter 8nice chapter!! |
 kyw0202 2009-11-03 . chapter 7nice! update soon!! |
 Darcys Lady 2009-11-03 . chapter 7Thia is really sweet I love it! Can't wait to see what happens next? I'm going to laugh if they see Hotch and Prentiss out for dinner! :) |
 kyw0202 2009-11-01 . chapter 6that was really good. i enjoyed it! can't wait to reed more:)!!
P.S. try to make as much visuals on aubry as possibly because i still can't seem to really picture her appearance all the time. not like the others. so if u can, that would be great!! oh and that bedroom scene was so well written, good job! |
 stepintothemoonlight16 2009-11-01 . chapter 4cant wait to read the undercover work. update soon |
 kyw0202 2009-10-30 . chapter 4nice chapter! can't wait 2 reed more:) |
 kyw0202 2009-10-29 . chapter 3i have 2 say that i'm a true emily p./dereck m. shipper, but this is the only story that i've given that chance where dereck has an oc love interest a reed. and i have 2 say that this is a good well-written story that i can't wait 2 continue reading:) |
 stepintothemoonlight16 2009-10-29 . chapter 3llins Slapped her! thats assualting a federal agent and thats against the law :0. cant wait to read more. update soon. |