Aw, nice start! Man, that Teddy is practically begging for it! ;)

Hey, first, welcome back!

And, second, thanks for coming back and giving us a glimpse of one of my very favorite characters. This is a perfect snapshot of the workings of Teddy's mind. You've captured him really well, giving a fuller voice to the sincerity we see onscreen in his encounter with HC. Very well done.

Awesome fanfic!All your fanfics are awsome!Speaking of which,please update fanfic Ratatouille: The Challenge most know what happens next!PLEASE!

the name sounds fermealer but i do now it was it a TV show but the story was good thank you for sharing your talents with all of us and i have read some of your stories they are good

Love it! It sounds just like Teddy and expresses just how he'd be feeling at that point. I know you've written Hardcastle & McCormick fic in the past and hope this is just the start of a resurgence from you. More -- many more -- please?

Well,here we are with another new Hardcastle And McCormick fan fic writer.
I always love reading from brand new H&M fan fic on here.
Well I will tell you this.Teddy would be that way.He is a kind person,he may not be bright on somethings,but he does sure like Mark and wants to be friends with him.
I do think Mark and Teddy are good for each other.
Great first story.


JeanneZ84

A very good capture of Teddy's voice. Of course his first concern is that he's left his buddy with an alibi, and I love that apologetic explanation for why he roughed Mark up a little during the poker game robbery.

It's pure Hollins: twitchy, scattered, and all at ends, but strangely sincere.

Ah, Teddy! It really, really, really sounded like him...the non-stop monologue...a good guy's bad guy! Thanks for letting us know what was in the note. Hardcase probably threw it away after reading it!

I've never seen an episode of this series in my life, as I was annoyed by the premise ("got off on a technicality" just isn't real. "got off because of police misconduct" is what it is.) but I had to read it because, well, it's you.

But I found this moving, with a clearly-defined character, a sense of decency and fallibility and self-justification all rolled in together, and of real regret for what he's done.

I especially liked the use of "of" for "have" in helping to paint a strong picture of a character whose education never caught up with his savvy.

Well-done/