P.S.
I know it is irrelevant, but you forgot to describe SUPPLY-R.
Sorry for being a nag. :P

Please do continue.

Signed,
Mr. Nobody

This is a very good story, just what I was looking for. I theorize that some characters might not only be super human, but also cyborgs, or have prostetic limbs.

I do hope you chose to continue this story. It is not only cute, but sweet and fun.

Please continue.

Signed,
Mr. Nobody

Nice chapter, and yes, Hal Is the cockroach's name.

idea! if you are doing any chapter that involves Auto, make him an intimidating but charming figure. like, say, Eve's current boyfriend, and later hates him when he tries to murder Wally.

However, make him have a pov that shows that he is made fun of because he is so emotionless. Eve just likes him beause he's attractive.

I loved this. I have always loved the movie and how they made robots feel and have emotions for each other and even personalities. I thought maybe this wouldn't be that great because it sort of ruins the concept, but I was wrong. Great job.

Hello!

I must say I quite like your idea and enjoyed your story. I like the little descriptions you added. Your paragraphs and sentences flow smoothly, the structure of your text is very nice, and both WALL-E and EVE are, from what I've read, in character.

The only thing that miffed me a bit was the talkative WALL-E. In my opinion, he (it?) seems more the type of person to show rather than talk, and you also added the fact he must have not been able to talk to anyone for a long time. I'd say gradually building up his ability to communicate would be better.

Nonetheless, I feel you've done a great job and am waiting for your next update.

Cheers~!

very nice chapter, update soon.

Wow, nice story so far, i would love to read more. Update soon.

this is bleeding awesome. please make more.

Very good first-person story structure. Keep it going!

Wow! This is really creative! Are you continuing this? I LOVE IT!

Pretty good one-shot, and structure of writing, and a few elements of scifi technology thrown in. Wall-E as humans is the best!

I read the note at the bottom addressing your possible other stories and future long story. As a matter of fact, I myself, are in the progress of writting a full-lenght novelization of Wall-E, as humans! I had this idea in my head for sometime and i too, am lazy. Progress is slow, finished to the point of Wall-E showing Eve his truck. I havn't set up an account yet, but i will when the story is finished, any helpful advise would be most welcomed!