aw i wish you could do more natsu mikan type

all of them were nyc ... I liked the 2nd short story cause it was a bit funny ... the third one was cute :-) ... and another thing I want a cookie :P :-D

its like the old saying come to the dark side I have cookies :P

but seriously they were nice

I like it :-)

Haha. That was sweet. It's my first time reading something KokoSumire that isn't all fun and games. It was serious and sweet at the same time, something I've always fancied when it comes to stories like this. It's all about what they feel and not what anybody else does. Awesome job. :D

Signed,

EzMouse

I found Natsume hella annoying in this story. XD I actually have guy friends who act like this and I just want to murder them on the spot. Haha. If I were in Mikan’s shoes and I read that, I probably would have not taken it seriously, but that’s just me. Still, it was cute. :)

Signed,

EzMouse

This is my first time reading something in Nobara’s point-of-view, and because I haven’t been updated with the manga, I’m not really familiar with her character. I’m guessing she has some sort of split personality? Her pictures always make her look delicate and soft-spoken, but in this fic, it’s completely the opposite. Not that I have a problem with it, of course. Haha. But yeah, poor Tsubasa. Even though the narration of his death wasn’t detailed, I still felt my heart get broken. Yep, fangirl. XD

Anyway, short, simple drabble. Good job.

Signed,

EzMouse

Aphrodite? Was that your past penname? :) BTW, started growing a bit hot when Koko took Sumire in his lap and started kissing her. XD OTL, I'm a sucker for hot make-outs and lemons. :P Especially NxMs or PxNs or TxMs... SxKs too. :D Ganbatte. Keep writing!

...Natsume makes me wanna die. He's too devilishly handsome and impossibly smexylicious for his own good. And wow, is he OOC in here. But it's hard to explain. He's OOC in an in-character sorta way. XD Good job. LOVES ON THIS. :3 XD

I pretty much knew from the start that it was Nobara. XD When I saw the word "hate" ad "Tsubasa", the first person who popped in my head wad Nobara. :P Great fix. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :)

DUDE.

How did I NOT have this story on alert?

FAIL. -.-'

Aww. I love the swing part.

Screw Sumire's old friends. *sigh*

HAPPY HALLOWEEN.

I fellasleep and my sister purposely didn't wake me up and went on my computer. Sonow I'm stuck until my violin lesson in nine hours(?)

OMG!

GROWING UP MUST BE UPDATED.

RAWR.

- Ghandi

Yay! Cookie! If I getrewarded more Id certainly want to post more reviews! 3

This was a cool story too. I like stories with Koko in them and he is always cool. You didn't disapoint me. Good on ya!

Ahahahahahahahaha! You could totally tell why Natsume was annoying her1 That was bloody brilliant! Good Job.

I really like this story. I have no words to edscribe how I feel ... I know that sounded stupid seeing as they're made-up characters. Clever. By the way, I think 'Touche' was a good heading - I understood why you used it.

Koko/Sumire 3.

I have to admit that I didn't really feel the connection to Gakuen Alice - this would have made a good standalone story (fiction without the fan...) if the names had been changed. Especially as they aren't best friends or anything. Or go to Gakuen Alice.

But anyway. I like the story and the style of writing you used and I enjoyed reading it, so great. :D