 Mikell 2009-10-22 . chapter 1Oh... This makes me just want to cuddle Raph. (Y-eah, think I won't try it tho. It would probably be hazardous to one's health to try to cuddle a ninja.)
Poor guy. It must get old, huh? :(
Nicely written. I felt like you captured his personality really well, and I love the discipline- even though the guy deserved a beat-down, Raph pulled his punch. Very real. Very Raph.
Rejoicing in the day,
-Mary |