Wow! That was just fabulous! Very suspenseful and very creepy. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks and Happy Hallowe'en. :-)

Awesome one shot! XD I'm confused though. The fire alarm went off when Tony was still going to Pepper, but then it went off again after they shut of dummy? Or did she just notice it? I don't get how the timing for that part worked out.
Also, what/who is Parthian? I keep thinking 'mythology', am I anywhere near the mark?

That was very creepy and very good. It was perfect that they were both almost killed by machines Tony had made. Really enjoyed reading that, even if it might give me nightmares.

wow that was so creepy! awesome stuff. =D

This is scary-a final attempt of Obediah to kill both Tony and Pepper? Shivers! Thanks for a very intense story-showers will never be the same!

Wow!My heart is still pounding.Great job!

VR, this was probably the most heart wrenching thing I've ever read. I was SO scared...I had a physical reaction. My stomach knotted, my heart pounded. Thank you for letting them be okay. Marvelous, marvelous, work.

That opening scene. Will probably give me nightmares.