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Kristafied
2009-11-02 . chapter 11
Yay! Go River! Go Jayne! Go everyone, for that matter. Welcome Caleb. :)
Kristafied
2009-10-31 . chapter 10
Woo-ho! Hank rocks! Jayne thinks quicker on his feet than most folk give him credit for! Yet another terrific chapter!
Kristafied
2009-10-30 . chapter 9
Good job, Jayne!
Kristafied
2009-10-29 . chapter 8
Holy crap -- the enemy of my enemy is my friend never looked better as an exit strategy...
Kristafied
2009-10-28 . chapter 7
Oy. Building suspense, brick by brick!
Kristafied
2009-10-27 . chapter 6
Urgh. Such a sweet, wonderful chapter, then you hit us with that last line! Never a dull moment. :)
bladefax
2009-10-26 . chapter 5
Great story...keep up the good work.
Kristafied
2009-10-26 . chapter 5
Oh, I got behind in my reading and had the pleasure of several chapters all at once! This bit with River "leaking" and her hyperdrive nesting instinct is pretty cool, actually. I love how Bethie was the one who figured out exactly how to keep her calm. I forget the kid's only about two years old.
X2P3
2009-10-24 . chapter 3
:D brilliant loving it
Kristafied
2009-10-23 . chapter 2
Hm... The psychics are restless, and River doesn't mind if the baby's born in space, AND they've got a potential "situation" with the pickup... I smell action!
Kristafied
2009-10-22 . chapter 1
Yay! So glad to see a new chapter! The bit with Simon and the spoon is too funny, and I like how Jayne's behaving about the whole thing.
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