oh my god i cannot stop laughing. that was soo funny. i loved this chapter! amazing!

Okay, I've clearly been away from the fan fic world for too long. I can't believe I missed this! Just read the first chapter and I'm completely excited - new awesome story! I'd
just about given up on any more good stuff ever appearing.

Not only do you use proper grammar and punctuation (you even punctuate your dialogue properly!!), but for a relatively new Gilmore fan, you're doing really well at writing the characters. Loved the Blind Sea mammals randomness!

So I loved the opening, obviously, and I can't wait to get home from work so I can read more.

wow. i loed this chapter. especially the sex god thing. it. was. hysterical. i laughed so hard i had tears in my eyes. anyways, great chapter! update soon please please please. (do i have to beg?)

Hahaa! Loved it! This chapter was soo funny. =D

Hilarious ending! Miss Patty would definitely do that, lol.

Great chapter! Cannot wait to read more :)

Oh My God, I absolutely LOVE this story. This chapter was so great! Extremely hilarious. I'm sitting here laughing my head off, and I'm getting weird looks from everyone in the room. One word: amazing.

I was giggling so much by the end of this chapter. The sex god thing was hilarious. Can't wait until the next chapter. Jess and Rory are so cute together in this story. I also can't wait until Amelia comes back. I really like her.

Haha, that was hysterical. Great chapter, update soon!

good chapter

great chapter, update soon!

I love this story! I just read all 14 chapters straight through and I was constantly, but pleasantly, surprised with how this story was going. You managed to move all the characters through the story with the appropriate level of reactions to certain events and nothing happened too fast. These are mistakes that most fan fiction authors tend to make. Also, I like how you've had Jess grow up.
You've done a fairly good job of keeping the characters in character. At times it is a little difficult for me to picture the actual actors saying these lines, but nevertheless I really like the story.
I cannot wait for the next update. I'm really looking forward to it.

i always love your chapters. i also totally love the way u used dula to make rory realize just how much she loved jess (again)! anways, i love love love-d this chapter. and i love love love this story!

loved it.

I just found this fic today, and boy, am I glad I did. This is the best GG fic I've read in a long time. And I seriously can't remember when I was impatiently awaiting updates of a GG fic last.

I think you have all of the characters down to a t, and I really love the banter. It's like watching the show, only better because there never was enough lit!love in the ASP version, but there definitely is in yours.

I can't believe that Luke didn't completely freak at hearing Jess and Rory having sex, but maybe he too has matured somewhat. =)

I will now proceed to check the story alert box below and eagerly await the friendly email telling me there is more goodness to be read. Please, let it come soon.

Great job, it's funny that Luke was so relaxed about announcing that Rory and Jess were having sex, lol