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MelloTheGodfather
2009-12-31 . chapter 1
So creative,funny and sexy!
I like this story very much.Well done!
world´s toy
2009-12-30 . chapter 1
G´night.

Okay, that was ADORABLE. First I laughed my ** off over those poems. Then I got a little carried away by the image of a Sasuke sitting behind a glass wall, staring at a computer screen and pushing a pair of slender reading glasses up his nose. THEN I had to open my freaking window even though there are sub-zeros outside because my room turned a sauna somehow... and all the time I wondered what the ending poems would say for it was clearly obvious from the beginning there would be some.

Now I´m finished and I have to say the end is ** awesome. I start swearing now so I think I will make this review a little shorter than the previous ones - somehow writing a genuine review is taking my good manners.

It wasn´t as much of a sugarbomb this time and this was good for it was a nice thing to have a nice peeled-by-Naruto orange after all the honey-filled gingerbread (nothing against the gingerbread!).

world´s toy
c7bi-kyuubi
2009-12-16 . chapter 1
ROFLMAO that was good!
Kumfu
2009-12-08 . chapter 1
Wow !

That was so funny, so sweet, so hot !

I love your story and I really love the idea of the poems. It was a pleasure.

Thanks a lot !
I'm-not-here-HONEST
2009-11-08 . chapter 1
hot and hilarius, could I ask for more?
It's amazing XP
KittyBlue
2009-11-07 . chapter 1
*lmao* This was awesome.
Funny and smutty: now that's a perfect combination. :P
Sullen Doe
2009-11-01 . chapter 1
The poems made me laugh, and the smut made me drool. Lovely story

--Doe
Belle Mort 13
2009-10-30 . chapter 1
wow
that was hot
Ruka-x3
2009-10-29 . chapter 1
OMG, I absolutely loved it :D
The story was cute, and the sex was hot!
Perfect, absolutely perfect.
I Is Hiromi And I Is Awesome
2009-10-29 . chapter 1
Omg This Is Brilliant Lol The Poems Me Laugh So God Damn Much I Swear I Bust A Gut xD

I Didn't Really But It Was Still Funny!

Good...NO Great Job!
moopad
2009-10-27 . chapter 1
Hahaahhaha this is so hilarious. Awesome.
I don't how you come up with those witty poems
Just great
ThanX
The Only Love For Soujiro Seta
2009-10-26 . chapter 1
OMG, butt prints!! HAHAH!
Utena-Puchiko-nyu
2009-10-25 . chapter 1
I love it!

Ovbiuslly... Itachi sees those tapes XD

Kisses from Argentina!
Nirama
2009-10-25 . chapter 1
LOL. He actually listened to Naruto? What a moron!
IzzabellaMarie
2009-10-25 . chapter 1
I thought it was really good and it was really funny!! I liked it alot!
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