Hahaha! I totally LOVE the poems... Love 'em! :3

I simple love your stories. They flow so well and I get really drawn into the plot!

I loved your short rhymes! They were witty, absolutely hilarious. I'm going to continue reading your work. Everything is so wel written (ignoring the minor spelling errors, etc.).

Love love love love love this heheheheh!

The poems were awesome as was the rest of the story. I just couldn't stop laughing.

one or two spelling errors but it was cool! sasuke was quite ooc but well it was still awesome anyway

Lmao i couldn't stop laughing the entire time i read this, and when Itachi said that to Sasuke I laughed so loud my mom thought i had seriously gone insane lolz _

*Snikers*.

That's what he gets for taking Naruto's word for it!

xoxo HinaKicksAss

lol I loved the poems they were so great.

super cute && lol at itachi 3

So creative,funny and sexy!

I like this story very done!

Gnight.

Okay, that was ADORABLE. First I laughed my ass off over those poems. Then I got a little carried away by the image of a Sasuke sitting behind a glass wall, staring at a computer screen and pushing a pair of slender reading glasses up his nose. THEN I had to open my freaking window even though there are sub-zeros outside because my room turned a sauna somehow... and all the time I wondered what the ending poems would say for it was clearly obvious from the beginning there would be some.

Now Im finished and I have to say the end is fucking awesome. I start swearing now so I think I will make this review a little shorter than the previous ones - somehow writing a genuine review is taking my good manners.

It wasnt as much of a sugarbomb this time and this was good for it was a nice thing to have a nice peeled-by-Naruto orange after all the honey-filled gingerbread (nothing against the gingerbread!).

worlds toy

ROFLMAO that was good!

Wow !

That was so funny, so sweet, so hot !

I love your story and I really love the idea of the poems. It was a pleasure.

Thanks a lot !