Aww Great job on the sick!Dean. You rocked it!

"S'usually Sammy who does this."

"Who watches you cough your guts out?"

He frowns and carefully sits back on his heels. Shields his eyes with one hand, waves the other vaguely.

"All of that. When I'm sick or whatever."

I loved that part *-*
Wherever, it's really not her problem eheheheh
I liked a lot ^^ Kisses and congrat ^~
Rosetta

Ouch! I could swear I'd reviewed this, 'cause I read it three times, found new vocabulary and everything...

I like nice, caring doctors, especially taking care of Dean. He needs a motherly figure, even more than Sam does. You got it right, Dean opened up, but not too much. Our Dean's a reserved person, would never give in so easily. He just does that, because they're stuck in the elevator, the space where people "are willing to submit to closer spacing than they would normally accept." That's true.
I loved Tara. I wish Dean's going to her clinic, or calls her at least.
I truly loved Dean coughing and sneezing and that the doctor's "...throat pricks in sympathy and she shifts closer, starts rubbing his back." Also I loved the intimicy they share. I feel Dean's not embarassed, he finds comfort in her presence: "She can feel the shift when his gag reflex kicks in. His breaths are suddenly slower but still railroaded in, compulsive. His body rocks forward and his back hunches up." *happy sighs*

I think it's actually quite brilliant, not a wasted word. Your writing is clear, clean and neat, so enjoyable to read, and makes me happy. Everything is articulate and works like a Swiss watch. Thanks!

Great POV and that coughing jag was all too familiar to me - maybe a lot of folks. Beautifully done. Fluff = love.

Phoebe

aw thats great ...left me wanting more :)

So awesome and sad!

"S'usually Sammy who does this." *sniffs and searches for a tissue*

Great use of the prompt. ^^
*huggles you*
Mary

When will Dean let someone help him? Now he's gonna be sick, alone in a motel room with no help close by. :(

Aww, poor, poor Dean. I wish it was longer. Enjoyed reading this, like your writing stlye.

Hee. You nailed it. And I love fluffy fluffiness. :D

My poor boy! I hate (love) seeing him sick like that. And it's when he would miss his brother the most. :(

Well done! :)

So I know I've been AWOL for quite some time, and I know I owe you the rest of "Fever" (I haven't forgotten! I *promise*!) but I am giving you the biggest pair of puppy-dog eyes right now begging for more of this. (Think the love-child of Puss from Shrek and a golden retriever - those are the eyes I'm beaming at you):D You rock, as always!

Aw, poor Dean. This was really neat. I liked the doctor's POV, seeing Dean through her eyes. Good job!

Ah, that is crying out to be carried on. Maybe he passes out on the street? Or when driving and gets taken to her hospital?

Maybe he decides he's fed up with feeling so crappy and he goes to find her?

Maybe even John takes him?

Please please pretty please with a cherry on top?

Awesome stuff here. Totally love Dean coughing until he can't breathe and until his gag reflex kicks in.

Really, didn't know that.

cheers. :D

LOVE this other character. Love her voice. Love it... And now I want more... Dean totally needs her.