Very late to your story...but, I did not feel bad for James or Victoria at all. Of corse they would have harmed Edward! And I love him. Thanks for a kick ass E and a Bella that did not whine!

wow loved it
what can i say i love a dark edward
no sympathy for james and victoria loved bellas sick mind
well done..

realllly goood!

Enjoy this very much.

Totally awesome story. I enjoyed every word.

IS THIS STORY OVER?

I love a good horror story with bella and edward coupling.

This was an excellent story, so very unique. Maybe it's sad to say that I wasn't disturbed at all about James & Victoria.

I loved this story. You created a great Darkward. I really enjoyed your characterization of him; his control, the way he dabbled in drinking animals for curiousity's sake, "The Plan". I couldn't help but love his methodical and diabolical mind.

Good job!

I didnt know u have write another part of it

just great I love the first part

this was a little bit creepy

with all that happen with James&Victoria WOW!

:)

ha! omg blood and sex and violence. Damn, Bella.

Love this mean and silghtly evil Edward:D great sotry

This was an awesome was a BadAss! A far cry from the shy librarian indeed. Since I tend to have a general dislike for James and Vicki, I can't say I feel bad for them. They should've learned to mind their own business. How in the hell do you make someone be mates with someone else.I loved Bella's talent too. I've never read another fic with it. Very would definitely be a force to be reckoned with.I'm glad the Volturi didn't catch wind of her.