Great idea with the format and story. I think it's great the way it is. I like the last section(?) the best.
Loved it; great job; keep it up ^^

Aiy-neesan! Hohoho... aku baca fic ini pagi-pagi lho, sambil nunggu waktu masuk kuliah. *gak ada yang nanya* Cara yang bagus untuk mengawali hari, apalagi dengan Yullen dosis tinggi XD. Meskipun neesan bilang ini friendship-leaning-shippy, hint2nya terlalu blatant to be overlooked, mwahahaha~

Sista tau apa yang paling saya sukai disini? Kontemplasi tentang waktu. Manusia, seberapa besarnya pun berkeinginan untuk bebas, tetap aja harus tunduk pada waktu. Namun bukan berarti harus menyerah, kan? Satu lagi, meskipun karakter2 lain gak banyak tampil, somehow suasananya benar2 khas Black Order. And Komui!! Oh you never cease to amaze me... aku cinta sisi goofy Komui, tapi aku jauh, jauh lebih cinta sisi caring-nya sebagai leader yang bertanggung jawab atas setiap jiwa yang dilibatkan dalam perang. Komui~ <3

Trus soal Kanda. Menurutku dia memang gak mau dikasihani siapa pun, karena bertempurlah yang menjadi alasan eksistensinya. Allen is just being Allen, sulking and pouting then throws sardonic smile to counter Kanda's not-so-subtle inquiry XD. Still plays dirty with holding Kanda tight purposely, what a boy! Mungkin secara gak langsung, Kanda juga menikmati dimanipulasi secara halus begini, fufufu...

Oh, and Lavi's line is killing me. Poignant and witty, as always <3 <3.

All in all, nice fic! Entah kenapa aku lebih suka yang ini dibanding As the Sun Rises. Bukan berarti fic itu gak bagus, hanya penempatan dan penafsiran kekuatan waktu terasa lebih realistis di Clockwatching :))

See ya, sista! :D

Regards,
SheilaLuv

that was beautiful. thank you for sharing. :)

always so great !

the characters are very well-respected.

yay! i like it best when kanda and allen are written as friends. there should be more people like you =P

This story was truly beautiful.It was realistic with their actual situation but at the same time very emotional and empathetic.

You did a great job with the characterization and the plot. Great work!

Really nice. Especially for a one-shot! You should have a cookie! =D

I LOVE THIS STORY!! so sad though TT.TT love the way you put the 2 together!

Really beautiful story, I thought it was neat how you broke up the sections for how they are both runing out of time and them running out of time together. Just a really nice story. Made me laugh and made me sad. Well done.

oh my...!
its so beautifully written!
i love it! <3

*favourites*

*squeels*
That ... That was so ... OMG ..
ILY so much for writing this ! *glomps*
I'm sorry, this will not be a coherent review, b-b-but ... I LOVE THIS STORY ! *hugs the boys* *hugs you*
Adding it right to my favorites! It's AMAZING !!

Excellent! I wish I had your writing skills! You have Allen and Kanda totally in character! But them sleeping together in bed? Questionable, I admit. But hey, it worked! Hell, you have the gift of making things believable. You could write about Kanda and Allen singing "It's a Small World" while running around in circles and I'd believe it. If anybody else tried to write this, they'd probably fail. No offense to the rest of the world.

AND, I absolutely loved this part. I seriously laughed out loud when I read this.

“Fuck you.” Kanda spats out.

“Now that sounds wrong with me in your bed.”

“… Go fuck yourself then.” <-Pure genius. I love the pause. " ..."

I think Kanda cussing in general just makes me crack up. Anyways, your writing is very amusing.

Just when I thought there was nothing left to write about with D.Gray Man, I find this story. There isn't any actual plot to this story besides Kanda and Allen noticing each other (and sleeping together), yet this story is so intriguing. Congratulations, you are officially [better than others] a writer.

Oh, and points for neatness. Ever clicked on a story that sounded good, but there was no punctuation, and everything was mushed together? Ugh. Makes me want to cry.

And, before I go, I just wanted to say that I hope this story gets many reviews. It's a shame when great stories only get a few reviews. Breaks my heart. </3
(If you really wanted to get more reviews, just repost this story after a while. You don't have to add a chapter or anything, it just gets posted again. :D)

I hope you write some more DGM stories!

Wow...so sad but sweet in the same time...

I'm crying now... *sob* T^T

I REALLY LOVE YOUR STORIES! XD

It was kinda sad actually..they both looks so desperate to be useful until the end,oh BTW..i wonder why yu-chan called Allen-tan 'walker'...i think it would be better if he called him 'moyashi' or 'beansprout',but still an amazing story :)

This is one of many reason I adore your writing~! I loved the feeling throughout this story. The ideas and emotions behind it were lovely and went so well with the flow of the story. I like this style of writing too. I love when people experiment with their writing cause it's interesting~. Wonderful job~! Keep it up~!