 ChibiBeth18 2009-12-17 . chapter 1*jaw drops* Elise. . . spelled like that. . . I didn't think ANYONE used that spelling anymore. Now I'm going to have to read this out of principle now. You just made a good day even better. |
 ncistwin2 2009-12-11 . chapter 12i have loved this story from the start! is there going to be a sequal?
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 lacrevette35 2009-12-11 . chapter 12WOW! It was a really god story! I love Elise, she is so cute.
Good job
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 Abigail Gibbs 2009-12-11 . chapter 12great job i will miss this story |
 zats 2009-12-10 . chapter 12A very good story and I will miss it. Hope you write another one soon. |
 chelsea1234 2009-12-10 . chapter 12Nice ending. Thankyou :) |
 chelsea1234 2009-12-06 . chapter 11Great chapter. Thankyou :) |
 NCISbexx 2009-12-06 . chapter 11¿Dónde está el TIVA? |
 angeleyes46 2009-12-04 . chapter 10keep up the great work |
 freaksrule 2009-12-04 . chapter 10awsome fanfic |
 kimly 2009-12-04 . chapter 10Good story :P hope you update soon! I'm totaly against Tiva, but do what you have to do. |
 strictlysuperb 2009-12-04 . chapter 10love it please continue & yes tony & ziva kiss please :) |
 Always a Marine 2009-12-04 . chapter 10Great story. Keep up the good work! |
 Mac 2009-12-03 . chapter 10 Yes please continue and i want them to kiss. Maybe Elise can tell Tony his feelings for Ziva. Children are very perceptive. |
 Mikeyjoe512 2009-12-03 . chapter 10cute chapter |