Woo, now /I/ am regretting why I didn't read this earlier! (Damn schoolwork. Even in holidays, they follow me like a second shadow!) I'll admit that I have also entertained the idea that PMD2's Grovyle and the hero(ine) may have had a relationship beyond mere friendship back in the future, and I must say you pulled off this one quite well. Ashura's tortured description was quite graphic, true, but I also tend to write stuff like that so don't worry, it didn't ick me out so much. ^_^ Poor, poor Grovyle though. Amnesia does have its pros and cons. It did reform Darkrai at the end of the storyline, yes, but there's always the risk of losing memories that you so cherish. ;_;

A very nice treat for my eyes! ^_^ Your amazing descriptions were present again, allowing me to really enter the world. You are such an amazing writer, and I hope you never lose confidence in yourself again. <3

This is REALLY descriptive, which is awesome, and it doesn't use too many words to say what you mean. You characterize your characters really well, and the conventions (what a strange thing to worry about) are great, which is a huge relief considering all the other fanfics which have horrible grammar and spelling...I'm so picky, meheheh. You really have a way with words, and a good talent with touching people with the deep emotions your characters go through. 5 stars!!