OMG, this is so good i want to read more!

Nice

I knew Cristoff would be up to the old crimes!

That is exactly how i thought it would happen, after he leaves and everything. That's perfectly how i saw it, good job!

Yay, Truman Show stuff! :D

Nicely done. I've been itching for an actual ending/some sort of real conclusion to the movie's story.

Not bad. The movie would've been better off ending something like this as opposed to the actual ending. It's nice to see that someone wrote an alternate one :)

AH! I often wondered what happened to Truman and Sylvia. I'd like to think that they would fight the corporation that 'took' him in. I hope to read more chapters of Truman's life.

I liked it. It's short but well written. plus it's exactly how I imagined it should be. Thanks

Poor Emily.. You'd think Christof would have learned by now but this is making him out to be even more of a psycopath than I expected. I think everyone was really in character and that's what I think would have hapened..

Great job! :D