great job! this was really well-written. moody and atmospheric, and you write spirit so well. this definitely deserves more reviews! ^_^

Before I review, I'd like to take a moment to just say, I swear I'm not a stalker. v_v -Sani

That was really well done, and I love the way you write Spirit as always. Also, I love the rich detail you use. I look forward to seeing more from you! (Oh God, now you have my account...*runs away and hides* )

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