Quite interesting, i was wondering how long it would take for SG:U and HP crossovers to start popping up!

this seem to be a good start, it'll be nice to see how Harry interacts with the SG:U characters.

Thanks for writing!

Making his magical powers unreliable may be nice for a drama effect but is *really* demotivating to the reader you know.

very interesting idea of harry being alone for so long. when will he show himself to them? also will he train himself with the guns incase they come after him? update soon.

so i really like this story line, but I've already seen the episodes- you should start bringing Harry in on the action. He has skills, not just crazy voices in his head.
update soon

Hm... this has potential. Though I believe that I don't really agree with your Harry character here.
I have know doubt that after more then a year alone on a ship traversing the Universe that Harry would be more then a little crazy and most likely in desperate need of human contact but the mutterings you've given him these last two chapters are ... childish and stupid. To be honest it hints at Mary Sue. You've stated that Harry has read everything in his vast library but for some reason you've still given him the vocabulary and logical reasoning of a fourteen year old.
As I said Harry is most likely more then a little 'Tom Hanks' with his own 'Wilson' but that doesn't mean he's stupid...

Cheers

Great so far :) I'm looking forward to when Harry unveils himself to them, or when they find him.

Well, I like it. In head crazy monologs and all. Although I agree that you need to move on into the story.
It's a great idea and I don't think people should judge until you've gotten a little farther. Please update soon.

i look forword to the next chapter.

Idea is interesting, grammar and spelling good.

But, Harry is emo and annoying. Even more than in the book.

In all this time, harry didn't try to figure what's the problem with his magic.

The main problem is that nothing happens. You just retell the SGU episodes and have Harry ramble.

pretty funny, I guess part of Harry's metal problems come from lack of air, though I thought you addressed that with the bubblehead charm? Can't wait till people really start looking for Harry and not think him a paranoid delusion.

Keep it up, can't wait for the next chapter

KEEP WRITING MAN KEEP WRIITNG

Honestly, it's basically a transcript of the episodes with a neurotic panicking juvenile Harry's running mental monologue slipped in. A for idea, F for execution.

good so far when will harry show himself to the "intruders"?

lookin forward to future chapts

wonderful fic you have here. i am eagerly waiting for the next chapter, but i was wondering when you where going to unveil harry?