This is really simple, and I think that's what makes it so good! Hilaru seems to be pretty in character, even though it's so short and he's serious. Anyway, good job!

'So short but the message is truly captivating.

Nice outlook! ^^

Good to see Hikaru finding himself.

Oh wow!
This is a really good little story that left me feeling kind of sad...

Eep o.o nice.

I like it. Hikaru always fought so desperately to keep himself separated from Sai, so this makes a lot of sense.

Well written. Good read.

Wow, I really love this one. And yay for HIkaru finally asserting his individuality! (In ways that don't involve the color yellow XD)

Devastating final line, more so in its lack of pretension than anything else. Great!

wow, short but with meaning. it's great!

short fics writeen like that are really powerful