It is so sweet
I think I might cry
good job in writing this story

This story just made me cry :(... It's soo beautiful! Great job, this is officially one of my favorites!

Wow, I loved that! Really well written, and the narration was wonderful. Great job.

There are just no words to describe how beautifully written this piece is.

OH MY GODS! That was the third saddest yet happy thing I have ever read in my life. But if your trying to make me cry, then good luck. It will take a lot more than that to make me... oh wait hear it comes, SOB. Anyway you should be proud of yourself for making the best one shot i have seen on this website. get this to Riordan and he will put this in his books as the end of the series. you are an angel with the mind that would make shakspear bow down before you. I also hope that this is the longest review that you ever got.

It's no wonder you're on my 'Favorite Authors' list :]

Your writing is smooth and flawless and it's so haunting.

Kudos to your betas, but mostly to you.

Keep writing! This archive needs stories like yours.

Lieutenant of Artemis

This is an amazing story, WindowChild. I would look forward to more of your stories. :D

Jamie

awwww, totally sad but heart warming, nice writing, great job!

...Can't find the words to describe this fanfic. I'm crying. It takes a lot to make me cry. This fanfic should be your hundredth story. It deserves to be. This is too good for fanction. It should be published.

DiamondDragonFang-Pertemis

Beautiful. Just absolutely beautiful.

Tch, awww.

That's all I can say. Click my tongue and go 'aww' because this is faaar too wise for any normal human being to write.

Are you a goddess? Hmm… you could be write? Like the goddess of writing-galore. D

Heh. Never mind.

Thanks for the touch of family in here, the mature Percy (we always need a mature Percy) and just the slight doses of love. It's good for 2 in the morning. )

Favorite-ing! D

This story was amazing! It was sad and happy, a perfect ending for percy and annabeth.

this is sooooo sad!i was crying in the end i never wanted them to SAD!

This story is really sad. I was crying the whole time. I never read a story that actually made me cry. Your a really good writer.]

i luved that though it was sad but good u r god at writing storys so plz plz plz write more more MORE :D