You know what would be brilliant for a second chapter?
The Realization of Sirius, Remus and Peter of what they DID at this...erm...late night meeting.
And then their various Reactions.
Just a tip. 'Cause I'd love those!
Also, you rock! Not many people can handle lemon and Lily/James AND stick to canon and stay fresh and NOT just be porn.
Basically, thumbs up!

Oh, wow. Can you write scandalous scenes, or can you write scandalous scenes!! That's a hell of a way to mark the beginning of their intimacy. Schoolgirl, skirt and stockings... Mm!

This is Ben-one of your axe-wielding betas, you know-just checking in to say I love this smut. You seem pretty practiced at writing it, is this really the first bit you've ever written? It read very well, and I was grinning by the end of it. Good work, Bee!

~Me.

I am instantly jealous of your ability to write the two things (and you write them so well) I cannot: drunkeness and smut. Good Job

Prongsie's

it wuz realy good. I like de way u xplaine everytin it made f

wow just amazing

Wow. That was determinedly smutty, hah.

Hot!

It was the best bloody fucking shag I'ver ever read in my life!

I'm going to assume he answers yes :D

;) Oh. My. God... I just don't know what to say other than those are some bloody brill writing skills you have
xoxo
B

Holy shit holy shit this story makes me seriously regret not sleeping with my own boyfriend before we broke up. omg so hot I am about to die right now. I really have no other words. Besides the fact that this was bloody amazing.

*dies*

Love, Amanda

Hello this is Héla.

I haven't read this in a couple of months but bloody hell, it never gets old!! I loved it as much as I loved it the very first time. It's so hot and sensual and kinky and sweet and funny and over all very Lily/James.

You're doing wonders :) Cannot wait for more of your brilliant work.

Go ahead and by yourself a cookie, you deserve it ;)

Awesome fic. Wonderfully written and believable! Keep up the fantastic work!

Love from PurpleLight~

Oh. My. God.
...
Oh. MY. GOD.
THAT WAS AMAZING. I loved it so much that...WOW.
Hah, sorry. Really, just.. kudos. It was so beautiful and the absolute perfect length, that I am favoriting this with no hesitation. Keep up the awesome work!

Amazing! I loved reading every bit of it.