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Amethyst Asheryn
2009-12-15 . chapter 3
Unfortunately I haven't seen that episode... I should go track it down, though (especially after reading this!)

I loved Flash's misconstrued words before they blast the door open... Also the "plot" bunnies. (I almost saw that one coming, but not quite.)

I almost feel bad for the Marvel heroes. DC's definitely above Marvel on my favorite heroes list, but you have to feel bad for anyone who has to deal with hostile plot bunnies.

Ashe
Amethyst Asheryn
2009-12-15 . chapter 2
Ignore my last-chapter questions; they're moot now.

In any case... Wow, this was everything I hoped for after the last chapter--and more, actually. Hilarious!

"The fastest man alive from the neck down"--Favorite line.

"Unfortunately for him, Clark believed that friendship trumped most common sense."--Poor Batman.

Thanks for writing

Ashe
Amethyst Asheryn
2009-12-15 . chapter 1
LOL. Poor Flash... Would like to see his reaction when he realizes what was actually going on.

Curious, though: Were they talking about the Flash Player, or a flash/external drive? (Probably Flash Player ... or some such, but I figured I'd get it cleared up.)

Ashe
Lady Talla-doe
2009-12-09 . chapter 1
Oh, that's too cute! Silly Wally.
XD made me chuckle.
Ookami Aya
2009-11-30 . chapter 3
Insert manic giggling and proclamation of love here.

...Bunnies. f CUTE
talk-ape
2009-11-11 . chapter 1
aha
Belphegor
2009-11-09 . chapter 3
Of course this is all a bit silly, but it's sweet and quite funny. I love Batman's way of getting rid of the rabbits - just dump 'em at Marvel's, they can deal with them :D I didn't get any of the Star Trek references (not being a Trekkie and all) but I loved the Disney thing at the end. Especially in the light of their recent big purchase. Famous last words, Spidey :P

One thing, though - you wrote "it's" instead of "its" several times. Just me being nitpicky :o)
Sakusha Saelbu
2009-11-08 . chapter 3
That was so damn funny! Plot bunnies that resembled their arch enemies that was so classic and to send them to somewhere "Marvelous" I have tears in my eyes from laughing so much.
Sakusha Saelbu
2009-11-08 . chapter 2
That is so true, it's just so easy to write Flash in those types of stories.

Besides he's more likely to laugh along with you and even give pointers on making in funnier rather than getting a Batarang in your face for even trying.
Sakusha Saelbu
2009-11-08 . chapter 1
Oh my god that was hilarious! Adobe upstart, lol!

I also agree about the search results, I keep getting sent to Flash Gordon and Flash Thompson on YouTube whenever I look up anyway Flash related on there.
Knight2286
2009-11-07 . chapter 3
I found a place for them Captain.
Mr. Scott, you didn't beam into space did you?
No, I beamed to the Klingons' engine room.
trecebo
2009-11-07 . chapter 3
YES! *fist pump* Plot bunniez RULE! This was just a wonder-tribble story to read. I had no tribble reading it and keeping up. The only tribble I had was sending it to the Marvel U, but then, I could so see Spidey digging the plot bunniez.

Check out the Mac/PC Marvel/DC parodies on YouTube under ItsJustSomeRandomGuy. Esp. Deadpool.

Also? Loved BatMom. LOVED <3
Churnok
2009-11-07 . chapter 3
Couple typos, but nothing serious. Though you are missing a ) in your author's note.
What is triticale?
The main jokes were predictable, but still amusing. The bunnies taking on attributes of league villains was an interesting element. Though it does make me wonder about the one that started the problem. I wonder if the existing bunnies change to fit their new home, or just produce offspring that fit?
I take it from your end joke and author's note that you don't approve of a certain purchase. I prefer to reserve judgment until evidence presents itself, but I do enjoy the humor.
DeChunk
2009-11-06 . chapter 2
Ha! Best continuation that could have been thought up. Loved Wally's narcissistic qualities towards the end, and the fact that there was actually some sort of logic behind his madness. Made me laugh the whole way through.
Belphegor
2009-11-06 . chapter 2
He kinda took it well, wouldn't you say? I mean Flash, of course :D

Putting Wally in a bad light and making him say/do stupid stuff is in the same vein as writing Batman as a suspicious paranoid bastard - the exaggeration of essential canon traits :o) Plus, as Flash fans, I guess we sort of feel entitled to do this, compared to someone who isn't, because *then* the story would feel OOC. Does that make any sense? :o)

As for Clayface... I dunno... Isn't Metamorpho already covering the can-turn-into-any-icky-substance-known-to-man thing? :D
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