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Luiz4200
2009-12-22 . chapter 10
Dojo…why didn’t you give us our wudai weapons?”

The dragon flinched and rub the back of his neck. “He he…Funny story…”

And why didn't they ask for the weapons in the first place? And what is Omi's weapon useful for?
Silvore
2009-12-22 . chapter 10
Great Story. Cool. Keep continuing. Well, the wierd thing is omi had a hilt without a blade, raimundo had a bow with no arrows, does this have something to do with their power to activate the weapon? thing to ponder great story
Luiz4200
2009-12-10 . chapter 9
What happened to the weapons.
blueheron93
2009-12-05 . chapter 8
Great:) Update soon please:)
Luiz4200
2009-12-02 . chapter 8
Great chapter. I'm glad the monks won. Please update.
blueheron93
2009-11-29 . chapter 7
I love this! Please update soon! Pretty please:)
Luiz4200
2009-11-24 . chapter 7
“Monkey reading Shakespeare”

“Dogs playing Poker”

“Rooster frying Eggs”

“Dog cutting grass”

“Monkey drinking milk”

Sounds like Hak Foo from Jackie Chan Adventures. Please update.
no1xiaolinshowdownfan
2009-11-24 . chapter 1
I like this chapter. It is not a bad introduction to a 4th season of XS with the monk's all thinking about the last while and Omi wondering why he wasn't chosen as leader. That was really smart the way Omi said he can't cry over "spread milk".
I will be looking forward to reading more chapters too.
Luiz4200
2009-11-19 . chapter 6
Great chapter. Please update.
Luiz4200
2009-11-16 . chapter 5
Who's the blonde person watching Raimundo? Please update.
Lemon-Fish
2009-10-29 . chapter 1
I like your fic so far :) seems interesting ^_^
Hope you will keep writing on the story.
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