 Viridian 11/19/11 . chapter 5Great chapter - I loved everything about it! I liked seeing the flashback to Sasuke's return, and the letter writing (how cute!). Naruto's strange popularity with ladies of the night was very amusing, and Jiraiya's melodramatic bemoaning of Naruto's activities in order to spare Hinata the hurt was an unexpectedly sweet moment.
Thanks for writing this story, and I hope I'll be able to read more eventually! |
 Viridian 11/18/11 . chapter 4Landslide indeed! Add the Konoha characters into the mix in pairs or trios, and I can see how everything and anything can get blown out of proportion! |
 anon 11/14/11 . chapter 5 This is also I want more |
 William 9/21/11 . chapter 5 Really hope you have time to keep going with this fic, because it is great. Im normally not one for the inclusion of AU things(such as the tengu stuff) in the fics I read but this is truly well done, and it feels completely normal in the Naruto universe. Lovely writing style, and as a grammar nazi I am thoroughly appeased. Also a big fan of the originality of your plot and the setting, it reminds me a little of Two Halves. |
 davehead 6/20/11 . chapter 2I'm reading this again ... tis so lovely! Please don't give up on this, it would just be a damn shame. |
 janeway74656kat 6/12/11 . chapter 5hey, hope u add more |
 Mondo Nyoka 6/7/11 . chapter 5I really enjoy reading this story! If you feel like it, please continue :)
And WTF sweetsweet whatever. Go read something else if all you are interested in is gore or lemon instead of a story that actually has a plot with heart. |
 anon 6/3/11 . chapter 5 i can't wait to see more of this story ! |
 hiNAru Aburame 5/18/11 . chapter 5Hi!
And... interesting... i like it... and... i hope you continue... soon... please? *.*...
Greetings! n_n |
 SweetSweetBlood 5/14/11 . chapter 5hmmph, no detailed suffering but oh well it'll do I guess that's what I get when I stray from the horror and tradgdy fics. Oh well at least their is some anguish. But come on it's a M rated romance where's the detailed lemaon. Come on you guys don't know a thing about writing good pretty gore stories. You are obviously a fucking pacifist not enough vivid pain.
Oh well I guess curiousity gets the best of me please write the next chappy later and please put in a lemon. |
 hotchococo 4/30/11 . chapter 5This story was so much fun to read:) Thank you for sharing. |
 La fleur exquise 12/23/10 . chapter 5I really like this story!
Haha only Naruto would just talk to a prostitute! I guess thats why he is such a likable character. Update soon! |
 Starfire 12/12/10 . chapter 5 Write more! I've been waiting forever! |
 Nagasasu 12/10/10 . chapter 4LOL, love the section where the rumor gets spread. |
 Nagasasu 12/10/10 . chapter 3It looks like ch 2 has some formatting issues; probably FF.n being lame again.
Haha, love the dialog between Naruto and Jiraiya. XD Very curious to see what's going to happen with Hinata's seal too.
WAFF at Naruto and Hinata's sleeping arrangements. :) |