 Lena2244 12/13/11 . chapter 13wow I can't wait to see what happens next will Todd get them did he find were Arnolds lives, luv the story can't wait for another update |
 Kimmiko T 12/7/11 . chapter 13I love this story!
Please update soon!
Thanx! |
 devious.editor 12/1/11 . chapter 13Ok, This is how it should end based on MY OPINION, (I want to make it clear that I'm not demanding anything, but if it goes otherwise it would feel too wrong)
First off, it's inevitable that What's-his-face abusive husband is coming after them. SO, Let's kill two birds with one stone (no pun intended. Seriously) and go with abusive-husband tries to kill Arnold, Helga being so devoted to him, put herself in harms way to protect him, and the bullet hits her pregnant stomach. NOW, the child is gone, and Helga can still potentially live, it wouldn't be a life threatening wound.
For those of you who read this, and are against abortions/death of unborn children. I don't give two craps about your opinion, your entitled to yours just as I'm entitled to mine.
That child should NOT continue existing. Even If Helga ends up with Arnold, they should not be forced (well, force is a strong word) to raise a child who shares blood with a man like abusive-husband guy (is his name jacob? I don't remember).
this sounds wrong, but KILL THE CHILD- metaphorically. |
 devious.editor 12/1/11 . chapter 1COME ONE UPDATE THIS.
I finished the last chapter under the impression that it was complete.
I was very confused and frustrated. |
 Jae B 4/24/11 . chapter 13Whoa. This was quite intense. I'd like to read the aftermath of it all. |
 PinkLotus27 1/25/11 . chapter 12and I come to the last review woohoo I am all caught up with this! AWESOME SAUCE!
Anyway as I keep telling you, your a great writer you just need to keep that in that stbourn brain of yours and we'll be okay XD
OwO I hope to see more from you and lets finish our stories this year (yes I'm behind on my stories too!) |
 PinkLotus27 1/25/11 . chapter 11damn now that I think about it...this story has been taking you eight years to make O.O
I'm gonna push you HARDER! OwO |
 PinkLotus27 1/25/11 . chapter 10Awesome mixed with more awesomeness! |
 PinkLotus27 1/25/11 . chapter 9(I apologize for this taking so long, but life has been crazy for me for the past year. I've also suffered from severe bouts of depression which kept me from publishing this. Yes, I've held onto it for a year; there's no excuse other than I really thought it sucks. In any case, thanks to a new goal-setting program, I have to write something every day, and it's being followed, so you'll see more from me in the future, even if it's just short stories. However, I'm still devoted to finishing this.)
WELL YOUR ASS IS WRITING MORE OF THIS STORY OwO YOU CAN DO IT I BELIEVE IN YOU! OwO |
 PinkLotus27 1/25/11 . chapter 8hearts and kisses! |
 PinkLotus27 1/25/11 . chapter 7Hearts and love |
 PinkLotus27 1/25/11 . chapter 63 I know these reviews aren't big but At least I reviewed it and since you already know how I feel...Just pushing up the numbers here XD. I am crazy about this story YOU KNOW THAT SISTER! XD |
 PinkLotus27 1/25/11 . chapter 5Awwww Arnold came back! |
 PinkLotus27 1/25/11 . chapter 4Like always I love your writing and the descriptive details for it. |
 PinkLotus27 1/25/11 . chapter 3YOU KNOW I LOVE THIS!
I had Todd here, he really is an asshole even though he believes that he's in love with Helga. |