|Reviews for Lilies on the Waves|
| Nyxitic Eclipse 3/29/10 . chapter 3
Good to know that you are alive and well. P
Wow...this chapter had so much info and I am having a little hard time digesting them. Give me few min and I'll have them figured out. xD
Sorry for not reading this early. Last few weeks have been so busy with school and all. It's spring break now and I intend to use this week to read Dragonlance...I got my hands on a New Dragonlance Adventures series...What am I talking about?
Oh, I shall wait eagerly for the future chapters, for I am still trying to figure out why you suddenly hooked up Malon with Link, not Li-Ann with Link.
| Guest 12/8/09 . chapter 2
Once again I skimmed through this to get a general feel for it and I must say I'm even more disappointed now. You developed the Link/Li Ann relationship for several chapters in your previous story and just dropped it and hooked up Link to Malon just like that? Again I understand that this story is more so about Zelda than Link, but there is such a thing as character development here. It feels like you just pulled a convenient time skip to retcon previous developments you cemented in your previous story. Why is it that most of the pairings outside of Link/Li Ann stuck while those two (especially Li Ann) drew the short end of the stick? I'd like to think my grievance warrants merit given that you do list this story under the "Romance" genre and romance requires development, especially so if you are trying to pair off an established character to an OC, an OC you developed that had a dynamic with said established character, and said dynamic being cast aside with the convenience of a time skip.
I bid you the best of wishes on this tale you are currently writing, but Layne/Zelda makes me want to barf to be honest with you. Should add that you went past the point of a retcon when you had Link/Li Ann passionately kissing. It deserves an explanation and you failed to deliver on it as of now.
| Nyxitic Eclipse 10/25/09 . chapter 2
I am glad that you finally started a new story to continue your old one!
It was great! All the lovely characters are now in action...alhtough I am DETESTING Malon x Link. Sorry..I never have been Malink supporter. Oh well. (shrugging shoulders)
I hope you update soon!