Halleluja, a Hatori fic that isn't OOC. This is written very well and I think you captured his character very well even though we don't know very much about his past.

Such an amazing story!

I absolutely love Hatori and I really think you got his character down perfectly. I loved the mentions of his past, and the part with the photo was wonderful!

Definitely going into my favorites!

I love Hatori fics and I think you captured his character perfectly!

Good job. =]