Just so you know...there is no doubt in my mind that if you were to change the names of the characters and submit this to a magazine or something that you would win. This is a very well written story with a nice twist in the end.

Keep writing!

wow, fantastic :)

Cool story! Had to read it twice to get it...funny, there was a contest announced today...Things Not What They Seem...this woulda done well, I bet.

AWESOME!

Awesome story:)

What a great fic! Thanks for sharing.

I don't know what to say. It was beautiful. Is beautiful. But it hurts. A lot.

Thank you. For beautiful. And even the hurt.

Eeeeep! What a beautifully crafted story. Thanks for writing :)

Whoa, that was really, really interesting. i will be reading this again very soon.

Well, I was a bit lost there at first, but then I got it!

You wrote that very well. Thank you.

Oh wow, you are a truely amazing writer, this story was so beautiful and so haunting. I believe i haven't such a good fanfic ever.

I remember reading this story for the first time - and absolutely hating it because aside from the bias (I'm team Edward, btw), I felt confused. Now reading this for the second time, can I just say this is one of the most amazing short stories I've ever read? It's so delicately written, and a quickly skim third time made me realize all the signs that I should have noticed. But you've just blanded the bits so well together, especially the dialogues. I think, if you change the name of the characters, this could stand well enough on its own as an original fic and you could definitely publish it - I would totally buy your work! I would definitely love to see more oneshots coming from you.

Oh wow... Very special story! :o)

JaspersDestiny recommended your story on our site, :

Argh! Do you know how difficult it is to recommend a fic without saying anything about it? Like, I seriously can’t tell you a damn thing about this one shot without giving the whole thing away! It was written for ElleCC in the Support Stacie auction, and it’s a Jasper/Bella love story.

Sort of.

It’s just…quite probably one of my favourite one shots ever—so cleverly done, so beautiful, so hauntingly sad. It’s simply perfect. When you get to the end, you’ll look up and say, “What?” and then read it all over again to look for the signs that should have alerted you that such an ending was coming. Mark my words, you’ll favourite this fic once you’re done.

Touching and surprising story. Loved it!