Yes, Edmund. That's totally the way to forget about it.

Great fic!

Caity :)

So I thought this was just adorable, and so in-character. I loved the tone—quirky, but not too much and with just enough Lewis in there. I also thought the hints of the future were fantastic, and so well done—not in a way that says "Hey, look at me, I've read all seven books and you haven't, newbies!" I thought it was very accessible and coherent. They were also the perfect mix of British child and Narnian monarch. They are very themselves here, if that makes any sense. And I loved how the conversation gets steadily more serious until that jaw-dropper of an ending. I kind of wish it resolved a little more, since the last line is so unlike what came before, but I also really like the shock value of it, heh. So, in a nutshell: wonderful work! :)

Great oneshot. I don't know why, but I love Edmund's last question, probably because of the fact that it's exactly what they do.

you're leaving us hanging there and calling it complete? that's like leaving peter swinging in the air above the pond (which was a great scene) but please write some more picking up on the last line...

That was good, sweet, funny and just well done over all. That last line was good. I do wish you'd do more on that, no ever seem too, come on, iy was 1300yers from LWW to PC.

Thank you for writing this! The last line was a bit of a shock, but I loved it, although my favourite part was Peter jumping into the water and the muck-suckers. x

interesting.

nice one-shot.