 GlassCase 1/12/11 . chapter 2Epic indeed. this needs to be made into a movie *_*
update soon please! |
 LoneGunGirl88 4/4/10 . chapter 2My god, I have been waiting for months for an update to this. I was afraid you weren't going to continue it, thank you so very much! This is absolutely amazing, I can't believe you're tackling a project this big. I have severe commitment issues with chaptered fics. That said, I'm enjoying this immensely. It's well written and heart wrenching and I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter. Good luck with all the research. |
 Lady of the Shire 3/23/10 . chapter 2I would have to agree with the possibility of biological warfare. It most definitely cannot be nuclear warfare (for obvious reasons!) and any other means might be difficult to employ over such a wide range in a short period of time. I do like that General character though, he's got spunk! |
 Wings of Avalon 3/20/10 . chapter 2I had been waiting, as a matter of fact - one does not write about the downfall of their entire nation and Nation lightly. I do really hope you update this soon - OC or not, this is good reading. You have a very distinct style, and it shows - mature, and interesting to want to continue reading. Keep it up, and update soon! :) |
 Red Hot Holly Berries 3/20/10 . chapter 2yes, over your dead body. And I will be the one to make sure it will be dead, if you don't keep updanting... *smiles*
aside from blackmailing, I like that story. I almost lost myself in the first part of the previous chapter (actually, I had to read it twice, but then I appreciated it very much)
Also I had to check it I actually had picked up a crossover, and saw that no, I didn't.
So all of those new charters are all your work? (the expression that came up to my mind is "farina del tuo sacco", but for how much I serched on the net, I didn't find a translation for that...) wow wow
wanna see more... keep on going! |
 K.T. Tag 3/20/10 . chapter 2Eh, you connected it to 2012... I don't believe that anything will happen but strangely as your fanfic states, I believe if anything, than America is going to end. Strange, huh?
So what's next? Eve and Troy on a mission to protect Arthur... wait... if America falls then the country passion has to fall first? So Alfred is truly dead... Wow. And What about the past conquest countries? I mean, I know you have a lot on your plate to write about as it is, but damn, there are so many people who would try to kill Kirkland now that America is down.
A better question is "Who is going to break the Ally's alliance first?"
I think it would be cool if you did something with the Aztec conquest or more of the Native American spirits.
Thanks for the chapter, I was waiting for a while! I can't wait to see where this story is going to go next! |
 Cheese-kun 3/20/10 . chapter 2The long wait was not in vain. Oh god, this is so epic...I don't even...
The fic is so intense, I feel so uneasy about the whole disaster and I can totally feel with Arthur. Oh my, I feel so sorry for him, I hope he's okay.
I wonder though...did Alfred also die? I hope not *sob sob*
I can't wait for more...omg this is epic. *man, now I'm late for my appointment* |
 Angel 2/7/10 . chapter 1 I love this. Really, I do 3 Especially the way you portrayed Alfred when he was a kid... I really wanted to hug him and comfort him.
And the ending... I feel like crying ringht now...
Just... Please continue this |
 poop patrol 1/4/10 . chapter 1Wow. This was a really powerful prologue. This story seems like it can be really, really interesting. Please do continue. (: |
 Lady of the Shire 12/27/09 . chapter 1Wow! This is a really good personification of the history of the United States, up to the part with the Fall of the country! I especially liked the segment with the eagle! |
 LoneGunGirl88 11/21/09 . chapter 1Holy shit... That was amazing. And so damn sad, I wanted to cry by the end. I like the setup of it too, I didn't think it was hard to follow at all, it flowed very well. And God, Alfred better come back at some point! Poor Arthur. I hate to be the reviewer that begs, but please continue this soon! It's amazing! |
 K.T. Tag 11/12/09 . chapter 1okay, it's offical, you have to write more. This is about the most breath-taking fan fiction I have ever read. I want to to continue to right. I need to know what happens. It was sheer brilliant. Please, by the love of all god and mythical creatures, you have to write more |
 Lanthanon 11/3/09 . chapter 1T_T
I hope you continue this story... I literally feel hanging by this. Poor Alfred. |
 fetishfuels 11/2/09 . chapter 1Oh my...I briefly skimmed the beginning a bit and I could tell this was going to be interesting, so I made sure to Story Alert it.
But now that I read it...the whole thing...Oh my god. Throughout this prologue I could feel my stomach twist with agony. Finally, after I finished, my eyes are watery and I am at the brink of crying.
This is...more than amazing so far. And no worries about the format. I think it is just superb.
I have been fearing this in real life and to read this...Hetalia-verse...I hold on to this story. I am sorry, but I can't wait for the next installment. Beautifully done, already. I feel so horribly sad. I need more, though. x'/ Haha...
I seriously felt like I was watching the despair before my eyes, and I can hear the loud cries and retches of both Arthur and Alfred.
Just wonderful job so far. You have my support and I hope you continue soon.
Every global superpower is doomed to fall at some point in time. History has told us so...I just...I don't know what else to say. I'm sorry.
But take care. :'3 |
 lee-uhm 11/2/09 . chapter 1Oh. Oh baby. -foams at mouth- I love this concept. The last lines are so strong xD. Can't wait to see where this goes. 3 |