Alright, I don't believe that you actually HAVE a half-monkey half-llama type creature in the shadows of your basement, but I'm reviewing anyway: Good Lord, I hope Charles doesn't think Hermione is cheating on him. There, that's it.

I've only just started this chapter, but I'd like to comment before I forget what I want to say. Besides the fact that I already love the story.

So your original characters. Probably the only OCs I can say that I truly love. The boys are fantastic and humorous. Not mentioned too much, and play off Hermione well. And Charles, oh, I love him. He's such a funny, goodhearted fellow. Really, you can't help but love him. I feel no threat to Ron, because Hermione doesn't even like him, but he's such a good guy. Can't wait till I can finish this story.

It's so awkward between Ron and Hermione right now...

OF COURSE I want Ron to do his little turn on the catwalk!

I love him so much!

Thanks for the story!

Me liked it very much!

That was funny. Heh. 'Ron's.. too sexy for his shirt, too sexy for his shirt.' Heh. Those little author notes were pretty funny. And spastic. It was a good fanfiction, too. Like, you'd think at one moment one person was the culprit, and then it'd change. It was really good.

wow wow wow wow. i really really didn't see that one coming. this is one of the best r/h fics i have read in ages.

This was great!And I'm not just reviewing cos i'm scared of the half monkey half llama, although that thought does terriffy(crap, that's not how you spell it is it? I really need help with my spelling!) me somewhat(hehe love that word!)

DA DA DA!OH! CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! EH! O.K, MAYBE I'M just A lil BIT OVER EXCITED. AH WELL!

Well, I just read you entire story.

Yep. I did.

And let me tell you something very important.

At first I thought your story was going to be okay. And then I realized that it was not just okay, it was a...

Thoroughly Amazing, Well-Plotted Story

(also known as a TAWPS).

I have to say that one of my fave chapters was the one in which the trio is reuinted. It was just so...*sniffles* AWESOME.

So yeah. I loved it. Big smiles for you.

AmazinglyMe

Yay! Good job! Excellent plot filled with twist and turns.

I don't think you've managed to duplicate a nickname yet; it's terribly annoying. Good job!

A lovely, albeit unintentional, tryst )

Excellent "girl who is weary of her boyfriend, but can't find a reasonable excuse as to why dump him" internal thoughts )

Beautifully written. Excellent descriptions. Great job infusing the story with emotions. A very believable grown-up Hermoine.

Great story. Wonderfully written.

This is a great story. I shall be reading the sequel soon!