I never knew such a short fic could evoke such pleasure! Excellent fic and read! Great job!

I think poignant is the word I'm looking for. Very short but it still conveys a wealth of emotion. Very well writen and well done.

I especially like how you used the Voice in Azula's head to tell forth the story. It gives a whole deeper meaning to her distraught over the situation

It’s okay when you have a conversation with yourself, but you should worry once a voice is starting to answer back ;) Poor Azula, you will get better soon! It was a very fun piece to read, thank you for posting it up.