 x3 2009-10-26 . chapter 1 id love to see this continue, maybe some funny romance could ensue before they find out theyre related. XDD |
 rumtumtuggerfangirl 2009-10-25 . chapter 1 definitly keep going!! Its good |
 musicgal3 2009-10-25 . chapter 1Oh, this is such a cool idea! You've GOT to continue! I want to find out what sorts of adventures these two can get themselves into - and about the redecoration of the junkyard! PLEASE CONTINUE! =D |
 Lulubel 2009-10-24 . chapter 1Continue!! I love your style of writing. |
 Krissy4 2009-10-24 . chapter 1I don't think that this can stand as a one-shot. There's not enough to the story - which is often very tricky with Diary stories. They either need to be 50 odd chapters long to get a story out or they diary bits need to be parts of the story and not the whole story itself.
As it is currently, I think that you need more to the story for sure aside from: Met - Adopted - One Antic. |
 The1AndOnlyMaxRide 2009-10-24 . chapter 1Funny! Loved it, darlink ( darling, with a K! )! This was well written and I laughed at the Monkeyshine part... I usually have Mistoffelees either call him Monkeytap or Munkustrip XD Poor Munku, always being picked on by cruel authors...
~MMG~ |