HDHD isn't an illness i have it!

update please, please, please, please

GREAT job! You got him spot on]

Omg it ROCKED! Hehehehe yeah i did bother u constantly about it. :)

Thanks for updateing! waited so long for this chapter but it was totaly worth it! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON!UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON!

waited so long for this chap . and its finally here...woot..hope my character gets picked.

I want to, like, hug the living daylights out of you for including Xander and making him so blatantly in-character xD

I am so excited for the next chapter- woo!

If I may suggest one itty bitty thing, make a new paragraph everytime someone new talks. For instance, this is what you're doing now:

"Blah blah blah," said Reef. "Blah blah BLAH blah," agreed Fin. "Blahblah blah blee blue blah," Broseph sighed.

Instead, try something like this:

"Blah blah blah," said Reef.

"Blah blah BLAH blah," agreed Fin.

"Blahblah blah blee blue blah," Broseph sighed.

It makes each chapter longer, and it's easier to tell who's speaking :D

Funny! LOL seriously. Wait, Jonny is still scared to ask Emma out or are they going out? TELL ME!

Name:Corrianna Woods

Nicknames:C.W. Corri

Age:16

Gender:Female

Stereotype: The Cute Klutz

Job:Waitress

Hair:Long, golden brown,with a green headband

Skin:Tan

Eyes: Green-blue

Swimsuit:A two-pice white bikini with green hawaiian flowers

Uniform: A blue short-sleeved dress and a whit apron

Pajamas:A white tank top and a pair of gree girl boxers

Surfboard: Green with white waves-design

Surf Skill: 6/10

Friends: Pretty much everyone

Crush: Broseph

Odd Habits: When she's nervous, she tends to count to 10 out loud.

Fears:Spiders(If they keve me alone, I'll leave them alone)The death of someone she truly cares about

Illness:Asthma

Personality:She's really shy, but when she's relaxed she can be really cool to hang out with, she's funny, outgoing and smart, but she tends to be a lone wolf and keeps to herself a lot. She may seem weird, but in all honesty, she's just super-shy. She'll stick to her friends and knows how to stand up for her self.

Other: She's a paciist who loves nature, she's a vegatarian. She took an exotic flower that she grew with her.

Neat!

loved it, just wish it had been longer, but i understand it can be a pain to write long chapters. Can't wait to see more of this story, it looks so promising.

this chapter was epic!

i'm so 'pumped'.

hahaha, get it? okay...that was corny. :P

i hope my character got picked.

c'mon, annika!

lol.

update soon!

Don't love.

Don't hate.

Am intrigued.

WRITE MORE. ;)

-Dotskip

whoa...can't wait for the next chap.

Great! I'm excited to keep reading and find out what other OCs made it. *prays for Xander*

If I could make one suggestion, try making a new paragraph everytime someone speaks. It makes it easier to read and more grammatically correct. Well, those are my two cents, anyhow.