I loved your last story and I can't wait to see what happens next. Especially with the tention between Kiera and her parents. Plus, Valentine and Kiera are now my new fav couple^^
so please update



greetz

Jade

loved it! definitley the best yet, most cuz of...you guessed my response, didn't ya? VALENTINE! you really need to put that swooning and fainting and dizzyness warning up on there cuz of him. he could cause a real accident, you know...XD. love it anywho!

Great sense of humour. Seems that Kiera is a bit goth (:
she's gotten a bit bratty since the middle of the last book. She seemed like she was improving gracefully, and now she's...oh wait! is she got that bit of evil in her from like was it the 21st or something chapter? like it never left her and stuff? or what? so confused!

hope you enjoy this essay! lol

Please don't tell me that the creature at the start was Talmai, 'cause he's dead! Right? RIGHT?!?!?!

LOL! I loved the way you described Kiera is this chapter!! Just imagining Kurtis screaming at Valentine to get out of their house "with words she hadn't expected from a druken hobo" made me laugh! And FRILLY DRESSES! Wow, if Aurora and Kiera have matching dresses, I think Lara might have lost the plot! But I really liked this :-D Aw, Aurora would look so cute!