dun dun dun. the plot thickens! and all the evil people killing others! great story, keep typeing more of it!

The 3rd chapters good. It has a good story but you should work on your grammar, and spelling(we really need a spell check.)

Great story continue writing it

It's sooo good! Post the next chapter soon! (By the way, did you get the name "Zaroff" from the story "The Most Dangerous Game"?

Good so far (just to short!)