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Shinkendo Girl Jubei
2002-01-27
ch 3,
abusedun dun dun. the plot thickens! and all the evil people killing others! great story, keep typeing more of it!
Rune Goddess of Candy
2002-01-27
ch 3,
abuseThe 3rd chapters good. It has a good story but you should work on your grammar, and spelling(we really need a spell check.)
Lord of Darkness
2002-01-20
ch 1,
abuseGreat story continue writing it
DreamReal
2002-01-19
ch 2,
abuseIt's sooo good! Post the next chapter soon! (By the way, did you get the name "Zaroff" from the story "The Most Dangerous Game"?
Rune Goddess of Candy
2002-01-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseGood so far (just to short!)
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