 Shinkendo Girl Jubei 2002-01-27 . chapter 3dun dun dun. the plot thickens! and all the evil people killing others! great story, keep typeing more of it! |
 Rune Goddess of Candy 2002-01-27 . chapter 3The 3rd chapters good. It has a good story but you should work on your grammar, and spelling(we really need a spell check.) |
 Lord of Darkness 2002-01-20 . chapter 1Great story continue writing it |
 DreamReal 2002-01-19 . chapter 2It's sooo good! Post the next chapter soon! (By the way, did you get the name "Zaroff" from the story "The Most Dangerous Game"? |
 Rune Goddess of Candy 2002-01-14 . chapter 1 Good so far (just to short!) |