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Reviews for: Falling In Love With a Lie
Long Live BRUCAS
2009-11-30 . chapter 4
Poor murdock cant catch a break with shy.

She better be careful or she could get herself and mordock in trouble.
Cathy
2009-11-12 . chapter 1
Murdock's my favourite character of the A-Team. He always made me laugh. He can do just about anything and I've always believe he was the most sane of the bunch.

I love your story because you are renewing with romance. Sex kills a relationship that you have barely started. You need to forge a deep-rooted friendship, a mutual respect, then you take the next step into romance, courtship. Your story is such a delight to read.
HelenBeacham
2009-11-12 . chapter 1
Oh yes I like it. Murdock and Sheila's romance is something to cherish. I love reading about it. I think Vi's green with jealousy that Sheila's found a chivalrous knight.

2009-11-09 . chapter 3
Poor Murdock.

He should tell Face waht is going on and what he did. Hes his friend he needs to know.

I just hope Murdock doesnt get caught or blamed for anything.
HelenBeacham
2009-11-06 . chapter 2
Great story. I love the relationship between two old-fashioned people for I am one too. Murdock and Sheila are like two teenagers on their first crush and not going too far too soon. That's what I like. There's a blossoming romance. A courtship that we rarely see nowadays and that is most refreshing.
Kwest82
2009-11-05 . chapter 2
Hooray for another chapter. Took me a couple days to get a chance to read. Darn work getting in the way. lol I'm loving how the story is building. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Long Live BRUCAS
2009-11-05 . chapter 2
Very good so far.

I liked the first one.

Poor Murdock. He really likes this girl and she after him for information about drug smuggling and spying on him. But the problem is she really likes him too.

I am glad she is thinking that he isnt involved less and less.

At first i was thinking maybe it was Face thats involved since he so good at getting things.
But then Murdock was talking about thoes other two guys. So hopefully its not FAce or Murdock at all.
Kwest82
2009-10-26 . chapter 1
Hey, just saw your email. Great start! I am really enjoying this so far. A bit more of a romantic start than the usual but I like it. I can't wait to see more. Very good start. Unfortunately I've been having a writers block issue for my stories. :( But hopefully I'll be up and running again soon. A little crazy here lately. lol Can't wait to see the next chap for this story! :D
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