Love it!

okay...I've read this first chapter and I had a knot on my throat since the beginning...I'm preparing my paper tissues to cry on next chapters...Loved it.

Uh oh... Natalie just found out, didn't she? Well... Crud, now I have to wait for an update. I absolutely love this fic.

Ooh, she wants to talk to Sam? I think I may have an idea what it's about... Ack, only one chapter left before I have to wait. I think I may die!

Oh, quite the contrary... I love cliffies. They are fun to write, and as a reader, they most definitely leave you wanting more. Fortunately for me, in this case, I have three more chapters to read before I have to wait for the next update! :-D

Your Embry is quite the love-able dork. Letting Bella fall into the mud? How terrible, but funny at the same time. And, although J/B is my favorite pairing I have to say that Jacob deserves to worry a bit about what Bella might be doing with Embry. I mean, he DID set the whole thing up, after all. He may not be able to help imprinting, but you can't just set two people together and then get all pissy if they click.

Anyway, I never leave long reviews like this, so I think it's safe to say that I loved the chapter. Hehe! On to the next one!

Hmm... So, Embry is the messenger as well as a possible future love interest. I'm definitely intrigued. Moving on to chapter 3!

Oh wow. Wow! I'll be completely honest, here... I was not expecting to like this. Not for any particular reason other than the fact that even though it's my favorite genre and pairing, the Twilight-fic-verse has been so over-loaded with stories with over-used plots and writing styles. It's part of the reason that my faves list is so short. *L*

That being said, I have to say that I've only finished chapter one and I absolutely LOVE this and what Jacob said to her at the end just killed me. You are really good with the angst. And, I'm a sucker for it.

Thank you for the amazing read.

Pretty good update soom

love it

this is not a jacob/bella story,it is a edward/bella
this just looks like someone's excuse to have jacob,jacob/bella fans read a edward/bella story.

i hate edward,he is a walking,talking mannequinn!!

JACOB :(

love it so far, update soon

I'm digging this story. I'd really like to see where it's going to go.

Keep the updates coming :)

This is awesome. i love this story! update soon!

“Alright? I guess this was a bad time to finally get the guts to finally go”—he chokes on his words—“but you just need to understand this would have happened sooner or later. I’m sorry I’ve let this go on for so long…”
This is such a good point. He just laid it out there so openly, for Bella to see, to understand. And he's right, she did that to him.
I'm surprised that he can kiss her like that. It seems like it goes against imprinting. It makes me wonder if he really did imprint at all. Maybe it's a fake out. I doubt he would do that but Bella said it- something's wrong with his imprint.