LOL Aww poor Donny.

He's not failing with his instincts, he's just... a little distracted by everything that goes on in that too-clever brain of his. heh

Well done.

Rejoicing in the day,
-Mary

LMAO, that's so Donnie :) A genius who can build fire resistant vehicles, yet overlooks the simplest things.

Thanks for writing, it’s also nice to see a Raph/Don brother moment, non-slash that’s one of my favorite pairings. (you could even label Raph as a secondary character if you wanted too)

Great story :D