OMGFGAH.

(speechless)

Okay, well, I'm NOT a Dramonie shipper and never will be, but I LOVE this, strangely. (Well, it's probably because Hermione dies, but that would make me sound heartless if I said that, wouldn't it?)

It's so... haunting and... sad and just plain depressing.

I love it.

Hehe, there's only one thing I have to comment on:

“I was always was smarter than you.”

I don't know whether that's a typo or not, but it sounds a bit awkward to me, you know?

But you know what? I don't really care about that, since the awesomeness of the story makes up for it.

And I like that I read this right before Halloween.

Excellent story overall.

:D

Oh my, this was really sad, but great. I don't really understand why she killed Hermione though.

"Or maybe that’s just people dying, their screams cut short."

YES. As a reader and a writer, oh, this line. This line. I just. You get my point, yes?

I love that you worked it into canon in the end, as well. If this isn' the better of the two, well, I really look forward to the second one now!

OH MY FUCKIN' GOD! I LOVE THIS!

It's dark and sexy and sad and just pure genius (plus the pairing itself is dark and sexy and sad). Your friend better like this.

~carrie~

whoah it was a good one shot so intense and sad! i loved it really