*Giggles*. This was an awesome ending! And the story was great overall. Wonderful characterizations, and wonderful writing too. I am very impressed. Your descriptions are perfect.

This chapter was awesome in so many ways! I loved Rogue's comment to Logan about how thin, silk scarves can actually be problematic.

Rogue taking on Sabertooth is always interesting.

I have to say I'm kind of relieved that Joshua is a baddie. It redeem's Logan's instincts and makes his dislike about more than just petty jealously. I do like what Logan says when he apologizes to Marie-the fact that she saved him, too. Wonderful conversation.

I am very impressed with this story so far. It has a lot of depth to it and I'm enjoying really getting to sink my teeth into it. Even though this is a "Rogue & Wolverine" story, I like the way you're sort of minimizing that relationship right now, and letting Rogue have some other options. A jealous Wolverine is a interesting character. Besides, Rogue's had enough angst-let the girl have some fun. I also like it that, at least at this point, this story seems to be much more of an ensemble piece. It's not just centered on our favorite couple but giving the other characters a chance to be seen too. I'm looking forward to reading further, and I'm so glad I happened to find this. Thank you!

I loved this! Lots of B.A. Rogue action (which I most definitely approve of.) Also, Remy made me crack up. Great work!

Great story! :)

Good fic, I enjoyed reading it. 7 out of 10!

I absolutely loved this story. Never am much for oc's which I'm assuming Joshua was but he was perfect. Loved that you didn't do the whole tired Carol Danvers absorbtion story. It was also the perfect length too I just ate up the chapters in one sitting. Also loved the banter that you had between the characters. Reading it I could imagine all of them saying those things. Lol now I gotta go read your other story.

Awesome. I think if I grin harder I'm going to explode. That was a brilliantly fantastic story! Hit all the right spots, as far as I'm concerned. In fact... *checks watch* I think I'll take a look at your other fic before I hit the sack. Even if I did just blow half the day reading this. LOL!

OMG! That was amazingly well written. I could not stop reading. I loved everything in it. I loved all the characters. I love how you gave Rogue those superpowers without using Carol Danvers. The character of Joshua was...wow, is he an OC? I normally don't like OC's but he's an exception in my book. You totally made me like his character, even when he was being all wacko.

I also love how you toughened Rogue up. Alot of these fanfics always have her crying and whining alot...tends to get annoying. I also love how you've written Storm. She's more... confrontational? :p Idk, but I love it. Gambit as usual, is one of my top favorites so him just being involved was a plus. I always love a Sabretooth/Logan fight and there was an actual plot to add to the mix! :p Yeah :D It was all perfect.

I can't believe there's not more reviews. There totally should be. I see you haven't written an X-Men fic in 6 years or so...Why? You're so good at them. :D

BtW, I also read your other fic, The Lab? It was awesome. The Rogue/Logan pairing is always a good thing, when they're written a certain way. They have to be handled carefully or else I just cringe and X the page. :p But your stories didn't make me do that! It wasn't on but I stumbled onto it on some other site...I finished it in one sitting because it was so good, and it made me want to read your other stuff which is how I found this story, so awesome! Anyway, thanks for writing these stories and allowing us to read them. :D Pce. :)

I love this, amazing chapter and all, but Storm is African. she doesn't have 'measured english tones'.

Aside from that awesome chapter.

I know that you wrote this story years ago, but I've just come across it and i love it to bits and pieces :) Lovely characterisation, an exciting plot and issues that make the reader think. Thank-you very much for a truly enjoyable read - I'm really glad you shared it with us.

Thank you for this amazing story. I felt bad for Joshua, and wish that he and Rogue could have been together.

Hi, I've read a lot of your stories, and I love your style of writing. I noticed that a couple times, in your stories, it seemed as though you had something against Christianity. It seemed as though you thought Christianity is a strict, overbearing religion and Christians were over-the-top zealots.

I wanted to tell you that Christianity is not about religion. It's about a saving relationship with Christ. Religion is all about Do. In religion, you need to do this and that to be saved. Christianity, however, is all about done. Christ has already done everything needed to save us. We just have to let Him give salvation to us.

AWESOME!

YAY! That was awesome! YOU are awesome! I can't believe I didn't devour this when I first discovered you...there is a very, very good reason you are at the top of my "favorite authors" list.

I don't know if you're ever going to look at this again, but I thought I'd mention that a lot of things seem to happen "unceremoniously" and you might want to substitute that with something else, just to mix it up.

Again, I kneel in humble awe before the brilliance of Ramos.